"An Iris in the Water" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: FFRG Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 20:10 CDT Comment/Review: This was an enjoyable short story--though I have to question the accuracy of the 1200m. 3/4ths of a mile? I never knew that that was an event. :-P I thought that this story showed pretty awesome characterization for being so abrupt, and I also felt that it had a good, solid plot for its length. All in all, good job and thank you very much for submitting to FFRG. --Dee
| Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 00:22 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: aw...that's so sweet. i feel so sorry for ayame...nice ficcy!
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