| "Strings Attached" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Sailor Light Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 15:05 CST
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...your skillz spoil me. D: I won't be able to read much SxS fanfiction anymoar... Great characterization and all~ (if I continue, I'd be repeating what Minix said. 8D;;)
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Title: W00t
Reviewed By: LuvaBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this story!!! Man if only I could write like this *Looks up at the sky and a pot falls on ny head* Wow I just luv this story not much to complain about. Just a cople of spelling errors but not much. I'm not telling were they are then I have to go back....But it's not like I mind *Winks* If you're finished with this story I can't wait for what you'll write next. P.S. You kept all the Characters in Character loves you for that!!
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Reviewed By: minix On: May 30, 2006 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I have to write a review. Your story (and the prequel Protecting the Lion) is just great. It is full of life, sex and emotions. The characters are vivid, the story touching and the ideas just great. They are believable and they are as much in-character as I can imagine. They do change, but the changes do occur with time and make sense. And you manage to make me long for the next chapter (although FFVIII was not my favourite FF your Story is definitely one of my favorite fics). Your writing is really good. And what happens actually makes sense...it is nothing is happening out of the blue, but takes its time - but just the time it needs and not more. You really have a good balancing there. So thank you for the story! Thank you for writing it! I am really enjoying reading it and waiting for the next chapter every time you release the next one...
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Reviewed By: S On: May 20, 2006 23:31 CDT
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Oh My GOD!!! That was awesome! I absolutely love it! But now I wanna know how the rest of the world reacts! ARGGH! Excellent job writing that- it seemed like something that could actually happen, you know? (I sounded like Raijin for a sec there...) It was so cool! :does happy dance: You're one of the BEST writiers I've ever read work from- pretty please with sugar on top update soon? (Loved the speed on this update!)
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Reviewed By: S On: May 17, 2006 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved Protecting the Lion- I was so stoked you did a sequel! :squeals: Your characterization is wonderful (from what I know of the bit I've played and read) and I can actually see it happening! You write wonderfully and vividly- and I love the speed at which you update! You update far more often than other writers (don't slow down! I wanna know what happens now!) and it's not just two sentence updates either- the chapters are an excellent size! I totally sympathize with you on finals, by the way- we have finals coming up week after next. But back to praising your fic! It's seriously one of the best fanfics I've read- and I'm always on my computer, morning noon, and night. That adds up to a lot of reading, and this is definately in the top 10! Keep it up! (And please please pretty please with SeiferSquall on top, please update soon! I gotta know what happens at the press conference! And what happens after! And... basically anything else you'd like to toss in there.) Two thumbs way up!
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Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You totally make my day with every chapter that release. It is a pleasure to read a story that will just always keep you on your toes...even when its hot and steamy. I thought Squall would find out Irvine was there when he left. Good thing they have some kind of steathy skills although, it could be that Seifer is really that good! lol, of course he is. Squall was lost in him...or on him lol. anywho. great chapter! luv ya!!
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Reviewed By: dracoqueen22(toolazytologin) On: May 05, 2006 13:19 CDT
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Yet another hot and steamy chapter and hey, little bits of plot are all good. Though I'll admit, i was biting my nails wondering if Squall was going to notice Irvine or not... I was all prepared for the inevitable fight but alas, the nail-biting was for naught. Still, great chaptera as always
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Reviewed By: dracoqueen22 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do believe its about time I made my presence known and left a review... after all, I have been following this diligently from the beginning. I am an avid fan of Seifer/Squall and I just love the character dynmaic you have created between the two. They are just wonderful together and I can't wait to see what you have in store for them. Zell marrying a cook? That was a brilliant decision on your part. Who better for him? I mean, really? Your writing is incredibly detailed and not to mention HOT. I love the conversations between Squall and Seifer as they are incredibly amusing and the sex scenes are very hot indeed, makes the room a little warmer every time. I like how you switch between detailed scenes and not so detailed sex scenes to show that the story line is not only about them getting down and naughty. I enjoyed the little Irvine angst and I only hope that he can find his happiness soon. Also, am I detecting Laguna/Quistis hints in there? Perhaps I'm just reading too much into it. I am a Laguna/Kiros fan but now that I think about, I would like to see Lag/Quis too. It's intriguing. Oh dear, I'm rambling... well, I'll save some room for next time. Keep writing, this is good stuff!!! And I look forward to your next update!!
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Reviewed By: margyy On: April 19, 2006 05:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was woried that you didnt post for a while >.< but yeahh! your back!! ^.^ i lov the SeiferxSquall-ness but.. the irvine thing is kinda "ehh" i have never read such a good seifer squall and i dont want irvine to ruin it, ya know? i dont want to end up hateing him >.> and PLEaSE put more detail & stuff back into the sex scenes! that would make me very happy! *hugz*
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Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the fighting in the beginning and seifer's insatible appetite for squall but irvine is worring me a little. i wish that he would just give up cause there's no way that squall is going to leave seifer! no way!! and poor selphie but i hope she doesn't hurt squall and seifer's relationship in any way! I love it, it beautiful (the story) lol and i hope to see you up date soon! cause its been like, more that a week lol. your allowed tho since you updated ur last fic like 3x's a week! so please don't stop writing...(i should take my own advice O.o;) luv ya!!!
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Reviewed By: Honey Nut Loop [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 06:00 CDT
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SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! Update update update.
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Reviewed By: Mally [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 03:29 CDT
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YAY! *bounces and twirls* please continue writing! dont EVER end it okay!? at least not until i die!!! this is absolutely wonderful - and i like sequels that just seem to carry on from where they left off so dont let that deter you! greeeaaaatttt work! i love that squall and seifer are soooooo in love.... please dont make it too angsty though! it rips my heart out! ^o^
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Reviewed By: margyy On: April 03, 2006 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
must say its wonderful (naturally :D ) im SOOOO happy you started posting the sequel
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