| "Memories of Shadow and Light" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 17:05 CDT
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Amazing. Simply amazing. I'm impressed by how you handled chapter 16, and to me, the hard work, effort and sheer guts of this work shine through. Continue this story to it's conclusion, one we ALL want to see. Thank you for sharing this fic with us.
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Reviewed By: moonlit dew [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 16:26 CDT
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sobs happy tears That was BEAUTIFUL! I just hope you'll write at least 1 more chapter. You know, to wrap things up? Maybe Yugi could dance for his pharoah again? But you're the author, it's really up to you. Amazing story! moonlit dew
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Title: Aww.
Reviewed By: Digi12 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God, I loved this story. It was touching, dramatic, funny, romantic, it had everything. You're an amazing writer and I hope I can read more pieces from you in the future.
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 02:37 CDT
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I can't believe the fic is almost over. This was an itense chapter. I didn't get emotional but I've been told I have the emotions of a robot, lol. Doesn't mean I didn't feel sad when Yugi died and Yami was holding his body. I'm glad that Yugi kicked Ceasar's ass though. I was so happy. XD
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Reviewed By: steisi On: April 15, 2007 06:28 CDT
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Unbelievably great story! I literally cried while I read it! The lemons were some of the best I've ever read! Hope you update soon. I can't wait till the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 22:12 CDT
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Comes running into the room huffing and puffing...here I am, here I am...did I miss anything? No? just Yugi getting into a fight, having a pitchfork stuck into his back, and sacrificing himself...okay didnt miss much..laughs....catti
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 21:14 CDT
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*tears* poor Atemu he loved yugi so much and he had to leave. I really feel sorry for him. the way you ended the chapter was just so sad. Update soon please
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Reviewed By: Tasa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 20:57 CDT
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I really love your story. I can't wait till the next update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nanx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 12:07 CDT
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Whoa! This story is great. Hope you'll have the inspiration to continue ^^. By the way: where did you get all those phrases in Egyptian from? I've been busy for AGES to teach myself the language, but I can't find that much ^^; Anywayz, hope you'll update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 20:57 CDT
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GREAT CHAPTER!!! the atemu/yugi lemon was REALLY GOOD! i'm sad with the way that yugi is feeling he doesn't know who he loves... UPDATE SOON NEEDS TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS WITH YUGI AND YAMI!
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 13:26 CDT
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I'm so excited this chapter is up. It was a good chapter too. Hope your irl stuff wasn't too serious. The only thing I saw wrong was on the grape scene, the roman guy said I didn't know you had suck something or other. You meant such right? Hope you review soon. =D
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 07:34 CDT
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I'm really gald that you updated. I LOVED THE CHAPTER SOO MUCH it was romantic and Great! Can't wait for the next chapter when they face Excodia!!!! update soon1
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Reviewed By: Chaos Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cliff hangers.... EVIL!! EVIL!!!!!!!!!!! Now I've got wait for the conclusion, and I have little patience. Can't wait for the next part.
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Reviewed By: fire_lily_fox [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 15:01 CDT
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you know, Chapter 12 is kind of hard to read. Can you please make it easier
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Title: CONTINUE!
Reviewed By: Digi12 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 11:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, this is awesome. Very origional, highly entertaining (Like Yugi's dancing. lol). You can definitely see the emotions flying. Keep going with the fic, it'd be a same to see it go to waste.
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