| "Memories of Shadow and Light" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shu On: May 20, 2008 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great for me even to take the time and write a review this must be great story hurry and continue .
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Reviewed By: TGB On: March 02, 2008 16:26 CST
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Lovely story. I have, in fact, read it two or three times. The grammar, however, could use a little tweaking.
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Reviewed By: DeathIsAMidnightRunner On: October 23, 2007 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was just... wow. I do not give out praise easily, but this story deserves it. Grammar/spelling was a minor issue, but other than that, wonderful. The emotions were woven together so well it was like I could feel them. (I nearly had a freaking COW when Yugi died... but I knew everything would be fine^^) I hope someday for my stories to reach such a level.
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Title: Oh. My. Frickin'. GOD!
Reviewed By: Keios On: September 09, 2007 02:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you. This was so genius, it doesn't even make sense. You write with such...I don't know - emotion. Yami's hurt and anger when he exploded and beat up Kaiba was tangible; I felt in my gut - ya know, that hard, knotty thing - the lust and love and passion when Atemu (and Yami) finally claimed Yugi. It is just - AH! Please, write more mastrpieces, 'tay? I don't know what else to say except this fic was lovely and intense and really tear-jerking, with heartfelt romance that made it an awesome lemon. Please - PLEASE - write more! Your newest fan, Keios (from Keios and Tirani)
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Reviewed By: blkeydfu8er [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was amazing! I love Atemu's personality...all smooth and slick:) And I'm so glad that this fic wasn't littered with sex and sex and more sex, because to me, reading too much sex can get EXTREMELY boring! I loved the fluff that was in the fic, for example, Atemu attacking Yugi with a tickle-attack (so cute!), when Atemu molested Yugi's fingers with his mouth while being fed the grapes (sexeeeiii!), and when Yugi slept next to Atemu on his bed! This is the BEST YamiYugi pairing fic I've EVER read, and trust me, I have read a quite a few. When an author such as yourself comes up with such a great YamiYugi fic, reading the others which aren't quite as good gets boring:) I look forward to your other Yugioh fics and GOOD JOB!
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Reviewed By: Sam-chan65674445 On: August 13, 2007 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My enjoyment factor was of the scale! that was SO AMAZING! OMFG! I LOVED it so much! Good job! I hope you write other fanfics about Yu-gi-oh!
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Reviewed By: moonlit dew [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my GOD! That was absolutely incredible! I just finished reading your last few chapters a couple of minutes ago. I would have written you a review sooner, but first I had to wipe the bittersweet tears away. Your ending was...amazing, mind blowing, nostalgic, sweet, sad, happy...I just can't seem to think of enough adjectives to describe it! Your bonus chapters were a wonderful touch. You can be proud of yourself, you did an amazing job! Your fic is officially my FAVOUTITE Yu Gi Oh! fic.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 13:59 CDT
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CUTE!!! *sigh* I always sound like a fangirl every time I read a story I enjoy. Even when it finally comes to an end. Even though I'm a fanboy. Fun, huh? Anyway, I love the epilogue (though I'd love to read more yugi/Yami smut. Hell, who doesn't want to read about that. HOT!) Anyway, thanks for sharing this story, it's been fun to read. Later, peace.
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Reviewed By: olesialove [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 01:58 CDT
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Minor question: Was there ever an explanation for what exactly pulled Yugi into the past (other than deus ex machina)? It just seemed a bit odd that he would be standing next to the mummies for probably ten minutes before getting zapped out of his body, and never actually touch the things or have any sort of perceived 'magical plot device build-up'. Other than that, and the numerous spelling/grammar errors and incorrect word usage, this was a very engaging story and really well-written. (though I do recommend that you and your trusted editors go through the whole thing thoroughly a few more times to catch those errors and minor plot holes)
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 08:54 CDT
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Your story was absolutely winderful.....i really enjoyed it was so sad and exciting and hot....You did a great job with it..
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 11:29 CDT
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The time jumping was confusing but after the note, I kinda got it. Please, please PLEASE finish the last few chapters! I'm very excited to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No one can touch this story!...it is sooooo awesome...it saddens me to think that there are only two chapters left...I have lived and breathed this story...right Lechan-sama?...and MM fans have blessed you with 60+ reviews, which is totally awesome for MM...*blows kisses*...hints up everyone...Key of Ra is coming up next...so stay tuned...if you loved this story just you wait for the Key...giggles...catti(avid manic fan)
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Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 03:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No one can touch this story!...it is sooooo awesome...it saddens me to think that there are only two chapters left...I have lived and breathed this story...right Lechan-sama?...and MM fans have blessed you with 60+ reviews, which is totally awesome for MM...*blows kisses*...hints up everyone...Key of Ra is coming up next...so stay tuned...if you loved this story just you wait for the Key...giggles...catti(avid manic fan)
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 21:33 CDT
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Nooooooo it cannot be over so soon!!!! The chap was great! Can't wait till the last chap! Happy Ending right??????
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Reviewed By: Chaos Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 19:34 CDT
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That was so sad! But really a sweet ending. I think you'll wrap this up real nicely, and it's gonna be even sweeter. I can't wait to see how this goes.
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