Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 08:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
1. Chapters are short but thats not realy a fault 2. Who is Naruto's Wife(if he even has one) 3. I havent slept for the past 22 hours sorry my constuctive critisism sucks ill try harder after you update. 4.Iruka was slightly out of character. 5........................sorry cant think right now going to sleep.............................................
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