| "Scars - Alternate Ending" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: dela1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i DONT LIKE THE ENDING IN THIS ONE TO MUCH IT IS STILL A GOOD STORY BUT I JUST DONT LIKE THAT THEY HAD TO DIE
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Title: Awsome!
Reviewed By: rin^^ On: April 18, 2006 08:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this alot more than the first one. It seamed...origional. I love sad endings especially when two lovers die together. Its just so perfect. So yeah. I do belive you've now made me into an inucest(sp?) fangirl. Though inukouga is still my fave.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: April 05, 2006 20:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok....I TOTALLY HATED the alternate ending. It sucked big ol donkey dong. The original ending was good. Even though there had been a life of pain and terror, in the end everyone ended up with what they truly deserved. In THIS ending, the only one who got what they deserved was Inu no Taishou. crappy crappy crap crap crap. On the other hand, the writing style was as good as ever. Even with all the blood and gore, or perhaps because of it, the reader can almost feel like they are there. The description of the pain bonding that the mating mark allowed them to share was far better than a simple description would have been able to do. For style I give this a B+. For the ending I hated I give it a Z-. Caitriona p.s. I hope you realize that this really isn't a flame...right?
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I didn't want them to actually die! Just get tortured for awhile. Ach! Now your going to make me freakin' cry. I feel it in my belly. *sniffle* -slinks off to find something of comfort* ^-^ Snow
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