| "Brittle" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 21:39 CDT
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I can believe that Sangow wouldn't be the most responsive of women. I'm still eager to find out what your explanation for it is, though. ~~~ Now that's the Naraku we know and love, Naraku as he must have been before the jewel. He's the sort of villian who can sit and smile for three years as the jaws of his trap slowly close. ~~~ So Miroku has learned some real unselfishness. I'd be suprised if Sango can't tell that he's lying, though.
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 22:22 CDT
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*shudder* man, that was dark. but not too dark, and it was also just really really good. I can't help but wonder how you do it, your stories are all almost perfect (I won't say perfect, because there is no such thing, and I don't think that you'd really beleive me if I said that) and they are all (or most of them) so gripping! excellent story!
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Title: i liked
Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 23:12 CDT
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i liked this twist to the story and it was well written and everyone still remained in character except Kohaku, but then again, we never know do we?
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Title: Whoa
Reviewed By: Amie (NSI) On: April 15, 2006 18:37 CDT
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Sometimes you're writing is a little TOO realistic. I actually shuddered a bit: "Koraku" was soooooo evil...or WAS HE? Miroku's and Sango's weaknesses and insecurities made for a tense, power-packed one-shot. Got anything cheery left in that bag o'tricks of yours? I'm a little shaken and could use some HEA therapy right now! As always, extremely well-written. Merci!
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Reviewed By: kagomeme2000(notsignedin) On: April 04, 2006 15:06 CDT
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Im looking forward to more chapters...Its good to see a story other than about inu or shesshomaru..
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Reviewed By: Krazy-Kilala On: April 03, 2006 17:22 CDT
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So many times we pass up the one-shots in favor of your longer stories. However, I think this is a really good story. I absolutely love your style in this, the way everything has a dark unline to it, and I hope you'll continue to write more like it.
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Reviewed By: MidnightsKeeper (not logged in) On: April 02, 2006 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, another great story. the darker ones are so much fun. i think that something like this is a very real possibility in the actual story. just look at the second movie. great job though, and i can't wait to see more from you soon. 'til next time!
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Title: 10 all
Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 17:43 CDT
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You come up with the best ideas. Yeah, that could happen.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 01, 2006 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Flawless writing,for such a dark fic. You achieved your aim, I believe. I was glad to see the ray of light that you interjected at the end (S and M finally got together.) However, even the ray of light was dark ("lies.") Do you prefer more darkness than light in your fics, or do you just enjoy the razor's edge? Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: zorioko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 19:44 CST
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woah.....it this gonna be a story or just a one-shot? because i want more.........
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Cablefast On: April 01, 2006 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, that was creepy. This story is awesome. I still feel bad for Sango though. Keep the good work.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 12:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this was extremely good. Definitely different. A very different take on Kohaku when the shard was removed from his back. And a look into part of the lives of Miroku and Sango. Interesting and intriguing. I liked this piece a lot.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 12:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my likey the story. nice job!
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... that was deep and dark and wonderfully done. I got goosebumps reading it. Excellent work! A great idea and look into that couple and Kohaku.
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