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| "Amy's Big Story" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Daos3_03 On: July 12, 2006 23:30 CDT
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Wow, this is good. I would like to see the rest. Great job!
| Title: The Review!
Reviewed By: Baloonshot On: April 06, 2006 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya. All I can say is... Wow!! Not only did you do such a tremendous job on words, (Which I can NEVER do!) but you did it in first person as well. Which is equally as amazing! The Cream outburst did give me a little bit of doubt, but then again, I've been a heavy fan of CreamxTails for AGES, and I love Cream myself! (Ahehehe!! I should really grow up to be my age!) I didn't particuarly like Sonic's desire in his life-style at the first point of Amy visiting him, but you made it all clear as to why, which cleared up the doubts completely! Overall, I say that this fic is HIGHLY recommended to those AmyxSonic fans! And any over type of fan for that matter. Unlike other Lemon's I've seen and read, this one had a terrific Story-line, and it didn't just happen 'Because they were there and they were hot and bothered!' Which makes it all the more enjoyable. I like good storylines me!
| Reviewed By: Watch 4 Stars On: April 04, 2006 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU'D BETTER CONTINUE HO-BAG!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! lmao Yeah, I'm hyper! DEAL WITH IT! MUAHAHAHA! Yeah... U_U zzzzz Sleepy...
| Reviewed By: Shadowlover1(not logged on) On: April 02, 2006 17:47 CDT
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There's not a lot of times where you see a good, sweet, passionate sex story, especially with a couple as common as Sonamy, like this. To me there's only two differences between a sex story and a lemon: feeling and depth. A lemon won't have a lot of either, and this had loads of both. A true 5-star rate story imo, and that's just only one chap. I'm looking foreward to how you'll blow us away next.
| Reviewed By: KittyNakajima On: April 02, 2006 08:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is Kitty Nakajima from FF.net, and I just have to say, that this story just floored by how downright wonderful it was. You did a wonderful job having Amy speak to the reader in first person view, and also did a wonderful job of keeping most of the characters (especially her and Sonic) in character. I could definitely see a lot of what they said actually happening in the games (if they ever decided to cross over into a more mature storyline). But this was wonderful, and I'm glad that this wasn't a one shot, because I'll be checking back for updates on this particular story. I'm already drawn in, and I'll actually be reccommending this to other SonAmy fans, as this has to be one of the best adult oriented fan fics that I've come across in a very long time.
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