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| "Scion of Kyuubi, RELOADED" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Dude...
Reviewed By: Syrus Magistus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is intense. I don't think I've ever read a story this hardcore and dark. It sends a shiver down my spine and is causes fear and other strong feelings to flow through me. That never happens! You truly are a genius. I had to know what happened next, so I went to AFF.NET and saw the original version. Other than the fact that you killed Sakura's parents in a very brutal way, I found myself relishing ever word of it. I could tell from the first paragraph that you're a serious writer, unlike those pathetic yaoi-obsessed Uchihacest fangirls who seem to have somehow gotten the idea in their head that men can be easily attracted to eachother, and, even more disturbing is that they seem to think men can become pregnant! But I digress. Your story is one of a kind. I also have to ask, when Akatsuki snaps Naruto's arms off and he re-attaches the, are they going to heal into being as useful as they were once before? And also, I have to ask, What happened to Sasuke and Sakura after Orochimaru destroyed Konohagakure? Did they escape? Both Sasuke and Sakura would have died at the bridge fighting Haku and durring the chuunin exams at several points if not for Naruto, yet it seems that they survived. What of Gaara and his unstoppable Shukaku giant sand form. Sasuke and Sakura would have died there too if not for Naruto and the Kyuubi. Also, Konoha would have likely been able to save itself from the invasion, only the shikaku form would have caused them too many problems for them to handle. Also, most importantly, when are you gonna Update?!?!
| Title: Scion of Kyuubi
Reviewed By: LaserCrusader On: May 23, 2006 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so happy that you finally updated and that you known that your Scion of Kyuubi located at Adult Fanfiction is once again accessible. Like i said before you are a great writer and your previous Scion of Kyuubi was just perfect except for Killing Sakura's parents. But other than that it is perfect. So when do you plan to update Scion of Kyuubi. And I am so happy that this will be a Anko and Naruto pairing. So good luck writing the next chapter.
| Title: Scion of Kyuubi
Reviewed By: Laser Crusader On: April 04, 2006 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe your story got banned once again from Fanfiction.net. So what about the adultfanfiction.net website. I believe that website still has eight of your original chapters of the Scion of Kyuubi. And it is now running as efficient as it did last time. I just have three questions. 1. Will Anko be paired with Naruto? That paring is one of my favorites and it is so rare to find a really good story with Anko and Naruto as a pairing. The original Scion of Kyuubi in my opinion had a perfect opportunity for a Naruto and Anko pairing. I mean both Naruto and Anko spent 10 years in captivity. And then they find each other once again. 2. Will this reloaded story be exactly like the original story. I mean will Naruto meet Anko? Will Naruto get ten years of torture from the missing ninja organization? And will Naruto and Anko both escape from the organization together. PLEASE DON'T CHANGE SO MUCH BECAUSE I PARTICULLARLY LOVED THE ORIGINAL STORY. IT WAS JUST PERFECT IN EVERY WAY. 3. When will you update this story once again?
| Title: Nice Story
Reviewed By: Shadow_of_Archon On: April 03, 2006 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wait, your story got banned from Fanfiction.net? Or did you just stop posting it there? As for the banning I don't see why it had to be banned, there's absolutely nothing wrong with the story. It was rated M at FF.net and M rated stories can have high level of sexual content, violence, blood and gore and it's perfectly fine since it's M. I really don't see why it had to be banned. Anyways, great story please do update soon. And if you get a chance read my current fic at ff.net under the pen name Shadow_of_Archon
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