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| "A Creature Meant To Be" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 08:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
creativity is a must and you do have a creative plot but the story does not posses the detail, the well thought out acting, plot, characters, and such and such. The story so far does not grasp the reader to want to stay and find out what happens. The ony reason why I had even read chapter 2 is from when I start reading something I can not just go and leave it. I will continue reading this story and hopefully give a better review then this. I will also note on any advancement you have on your writing skills.
| Title: Great Prologue
Reviewed By: DarknessReader (notsignedon) On: April 02, 2006 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great prologue. I can't wait to see the other chapters! Nice cliffy for it by the way.
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