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Reviewed By: Buffalocatz [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT story ~ Please keep writing! You have a wonderful sense of humor and emotions. I can't wait to read the rest! ;)
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Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 02:38 CDT
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Amazing as usual I love this story. I'm enjoying the sexual tension and mystery. You are a great writter.
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Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 01:41 CDT
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Ahh gotta love the sexual tension with Jin. I adore your humor, it is difficult to write and you do it very well. You're doing such an amazing job with everyone's characters I can see this story in my head like an episode. Physcial discriptions are good like doe eyes, pink cheeks and such. Even though I know what they look like it helps build the picture in my mind, plus you are quite good at discriptions. I am loving every inch of this story and can't wait to see what the heck is going on with Doe eyes, hotie secret agent with moley side kick and ambigously-young-assasin-duo....am I forgeting anyone? Very gripping and enjoyable:)
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 21:03 CDT
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I have enjoying this story. I stayed up way late just to read up to where you last posted. I like the idea of the three of them together. Can't wait to see how the guy work out every thing. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: maas On: June 07, 2006 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You do an excellent job at recreating the characters, especially the little things they did in the show that made them so loveable. And your writing style is far above most other fanfics out there. Well done. I look forward to reading more from you.
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Reviewed By: CoffeeGyrl not signed in On: May 25, 2006 03:20 CDT
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Sorry I don't have the time to give this the review it deserves but I had to tell you that you are doing an amaizing job. I love the incorporation of old characters and the past with the new. I love how you are writing Jin I just want to glop him. Everything you do is perfect.
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Reviewed By: gracemis On: May 17, 2006 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nicely written story. thanks for sharing it
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Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 01:37 CDT
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Gods you write so bueatifuly I adore this story. Your lines like 'the moon was too bright' agh pure freaking poetry. Hoooot kiss between Mugen and Fuu, I love the trembling hands. So cute, I'm really interested in how you are molding this story its very good. Again as far as pairings go I love a threesome with these guys but any thing you do is good. I love Jin not realizing her love too cute, and the whole 'family' thing gawd just plays my little heart strings. Great use of past characters I adore your work.
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Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 19:17 CDT
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I love this story, you are killing me with the anticipation of who this mystery man of Fuu's is. I love the aside thoughts like how Mugen got rice on his forehead. Everyone is wonderfully in character, your story is very orginal and flows from the anime so seamlessly that it is effortless. I love your writting style and vocab you are a wonderful storyteller. I adore this story and check it even though I didn't get MM email just in case there is more. I'm totally addicted. Love love love it:)
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 22:41 CDT
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I'm a new fan of Samuria Champloo, and I have to say, the characterisation you have going on in this story is so good. I feel like I'm watching a new episode every chapter. I look forward to your next post. :D
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Reviewed By: ardane1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry, Hurry update!!! Lovely story! I am waiting on pins and needles!! Help they are sharp!!
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Reviewed By: Ilovecheetos On: April 15, 2006 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very good. Very well written. I enjoyed it very much. There are not very mant Samurai Champloo storys out there that have have caught my interest. I eagerly await a update.
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Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 00:03 CDT
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This was so freaking funny! I was laughing out loud at the cafe I'm reading this in. Humor is so difficult to write but you do an amazing job. Where else do you post your stories? I really liked the non verbal spar of Mugen and Jin and Mugen's nickname of 'nose digger' so freaking funny. The sexy thoughts mixed in with the humor was great I just can't say how much I love this story, you really keep everyone in character so well I can almost see this as anime in my head. Could you please give a small translation at the bottem of the page I haven't heard of Ojosama before in fan fiction that I have read before. I like your spacing, story pacing and use of type. Very easy to read and great flow. Love it!
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Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 04:23 CDT
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Oh yea I forgot to mention, I don't care which one you pick for the pairing both work very well for me. I like the threesomes the best but hey its your story. Again I love the details and the use of language you explain the Japanese you are using very well in the story, I really like that as I'm not much of a Japanese buff. Love, love, love it!
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Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 04:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH gods this is the best freaking SC I've ever read. The story is gripping and orginal, yet you weave the past so seemlessly. The pacing a flow as well as the great use of discription is wonderful. I love the little details such as Momo's ref, just how far can Mujen pick his nose and Jin's little 'hee' gawd that was great. You are a top notch writer I'm putting you on my favorites list:)
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