| "Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lilly_22 On: May 17, 2006 21:12 EDT
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this fic is really good! please update i'm interested to see where you're going to take it.
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Reviewed By: sun_raye [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 02:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great start! I'm dying to read the rest!
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Title: so good
Reviewed By: demonwitch [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 16:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FANTASMIC! keep writing and ill keep reading;)
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Title: very hot!
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: April 03, 2006 16:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a well written one shot. Vegeta and Bulma as you can tell are my favorite couple. You did a great job in revealing a plausible relationship for them during the 3 years time span and kept their personalities true to cannon, not easy to do! Congratualtions. I look forward to reading your other stories.
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Reviewed By: June16458 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 03:06 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it. keep up the work.
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Reviewed By: ffy On: April 03, 2006 00:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
vegeta is such a a**!!!i mean, i know he can control bulma and all dat!! but, 4 goodness sake, da guy barely touches da chik like she craves 4...but, after all, briefs always finds ways 2 get bak at him...she wont let him just get advantage of her like dat!! she's bulma!!! she's supposed 2 get bak at people 2!!! perfect match 4 vegeta!!! n_n !!
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Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: April 02, 2006 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely poetic. I enjoy the characters at each others throats, it suits them well. Can't wait for the next installment! Great lemon!!!
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: April 02, 2006 18:46 EDT
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I think this is great and one of my new favourites! The characterization and relationship is so correct. I'm really interested in where your going with this and how they fall in love (if they do!!) I'd love to see Vegetas take on the situation too. I hope I see an update soon. Thanks
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