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Reviewed By: marlene_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2011 11:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats the kind of torture that i love :D great fic!! it´s amazing! so hot and pervert. yes, i can imagine this twisted personality in vegeta.And your bulma it´s a complex woman so... the pairing is awesome! and i love it! |
Reviewed By: anon. On: August 03, 2007 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope you come back and finish this fic it is really good, I love the dark theme your playing with: Update soon!
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Title: LOVED IT!!
Reviewed By: pookie On: July 26, 2007 04:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love this fic so far so please update soon!
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!
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Title: Please Finish!
Reviewed By: Crazy Ash (not logged in) On: June 17, 2007 06:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like where this story is going! Please update soon! I would be ever so grateful!!
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Title: Possession chapters 1-3 (good start!)
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 10:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has LOTS of potential...and the first chapter draws you in. But it seems as the story progresses the spelling and grammar goes right out of the window. Please, make sure to proofread before your post! I know you're getting a great response from readers, but don't bring the pressure on your self by posting so hastily. Take your time, re-read your material over and over, and even ask around for a couple of beta readers so they can pick up on the errors you don't see or overlook. Good luck, I'll be looking for the next installment! gg
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Reviewed By: Kyona [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 05:35 EDT
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I love your writing, and the plot that I hope you're taking. Though even still, whatever turns or twists this story will take, I'm sure I'll love them. As long as, of course, it stays true to the larger parts of the DBZ timeline. I'm pretty picky about that, haha. But really, I love this. I notice that you updated almost a year after the first chapter. I really hope that we don't have to wait nearly as long for the next chapter, or, next few chapters. Thank you very much for writing and posting your story. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 17:18 EDT
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Awesome story, keep it up, update soon.
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 16:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is excellent, why did you not finish, ive been reading your other story too, you are a really good writer, you really portray vegeta how we all like him EVIL, please update this story as well
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Reviewed By: pink_princess On: September 29, 2006 02:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this fic you real got the character of vegeta right. PLEASEEE pretty PLEASE update!
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Reviewed By: Catreens On: August 16, 2006 20:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. Nice writing. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: X-Tina16 On: July 20, 2006 16:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story so far. it's not bad indeed. good luck with future chapters
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Reviewed By: darkmagicuser92 On: July 15, 2006 12:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the plot that you have chosen. I only hope that you continue this story. Do not give up. I cannot wait for you to update.
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Reviewed By: Laredith_VegetasPrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 17:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great lemon fic!!! Give us another chappy^-^ Great intro and conclusion, hardest parts to write!
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Reviewed By: Louise85 On: May 24, 2006 18:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like some other reviewers, I was pleasantly surprised to read a fic such as this one. You've described their relationship perfectly. It's exactly as it should be in the 3-year period. A lot of writers make them fall in love too soon even when it's obvious it wasn't love in that period; the love came mucb later. Very well done. I hope you'll update this soon!
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