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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 16:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is excellent, why did you not finish, ive been reading your other story too, you are a really good writer, you really portray vegeta how we all like him EVIL, please update this story as well
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Reviewed By: pink_princess On: September 29, 2006 02:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this fic you real got the character of vegeta right. PLEASEEE pretty PLEASE update!
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Reviewed By: Catreens On: August 16, 2006 20:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. Nice writing. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: X-Tina16 On: July 20, 2006 16:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story so far. it's not bad indeed. good luck with future chapters
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Reviewed By: darkmagicuser92 On: July 15, 2006 12:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the plot that you have chosen. I only hope that you continue this story. Do not give up. I cannot wait for you to update.
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Reviewed By: Laredith_VegetasPrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 17:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great lemon fic!!! Give us another chappy^-^ Great intro and conclusion, hardest parts to write!
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Reviewed By: Louise85 On: May 24, 2006 18:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like some other reviewers, I was pleasantly surprised to read a fic such as this one. You've described their relationship perfectly. It's exactly as it should be in the 3-year period. A lot of writers make them fall in love too soon even when it's obvious it wasn't love in that period; the love came mucb later. Very well done. I hope you'll update this soon!
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Reviewed By: Lilly_22 On: May 17, 2006 21:12 EDT
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this fic is really good! please update i'm interested to see where you're going to take it.
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Reviewed By: sun_raye [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 02:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great start! I'm dying to read the rest!
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Title: so good
Reviewed By: demonwitch [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 16:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FANTASMIC! keep writing and ill keep reading;)
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Title: very hot!
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: April 03, 2006 16:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a well written one shot. Vegeta and Bulma as you can tell are my favorite couple. You did a great job in revealing a plausible relationship for them during the 3 years time span and kept their personalities true to cannon, not easy to do! Congratualtions. I look forward to reading your other stories.
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Reviewed By: June16458 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 03:06 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it. keep up the work.
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Reviewed By: ffy On: April 03, 2006 00:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
vegeta is such a a**!!!i mean, i know he can control bulma and all dat!! but, 4 goodness sake, da guy barely touches da chik like she craves 4...but, after all, briefs always finds ways 2 get bak at him...she wont let him just get advantage of her like dat!! she's bulma!!! she's supposed 2 get bak at people 2!!! perfect match 4 vegeta!!! n_n !!
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Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: April 02, 2006 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely poetic. I enjoy the characters at each others throats, it suits them well. Can't wait for the next installment! Great lemon!!!
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: April 02, 2006 18:46 EDT
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I think this is great and one of my new favourites! The characterization and relationship is so correct. I'm really interested in where your going with this and how they fall in love (if they do!!) I'd love to see Vegetas take on the situation too. I hope I see an update soon. Thanks
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