| "Snow" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: george16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this sooo much i can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: george16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far; your very evil with the cliffhangers I cannot wait for the next chapter to see what happens next. overall in total you seriously kick ass ~! n_n!
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nli On: July 27, 2006 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
W00t! Update! And I didn't have to bitch about the format!(Sorry, I couldn't resist) And the kiss was pretty hot too. Still wish the chapters were longer, but I myself can't complain much about That until I update my own fic.
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Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 20:08 CDT
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Come on r u goin to finish, yes/no come on!!
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nli On: June 09, 2006 19:26 CDT
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Yay update. Of all of your fics, this one happens to be one of my favorites. Sure, I'm rude, leave short, non-gratifying reviews, but that's a Hell of a lot more then I do for most of the fics I read. Feel proud that your writing is enough to get me off my perverted lazy ass to say so. Oh, and you have run-on paragraphs. Try and get space between 'em so I don't get lost as easily. I'm blind as I am twisted. --.--
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Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama On: April 23, 2006 17:13 CDT
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U ever goin to udate? this is very good lookin forward to da next chapter
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nsi On: April 14, 2006 22:56 CDT
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No offence, but what the HELL are the monsters saying? And what language is it anyways? With that a side, SHAME ON YOU. Leaving a cliffy, and after such a short chapter. Your Evil. Not as Evil as I am, mind you, but still pretty Evil. I'm getting very interested in this fic, and I Hope to see more of it soon. Later.
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Reviewed By: your lovely friend On: April 09, 2006 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hej, ten fanfik jest naprawde super! Kocham Ryou, no i oczywiscie Buku-chan :-) Musisz napisac wiecej. OK, so now for everyone else to understand... I think this fanfic is v.good. It's a nice new perspective on the whole vamp thing. And of course, it has Ryou and Bakura in it (gotta love them). Write more soon! (Acha, i uwazaj na ortografie. muahahahahahahahahahahahaha. no dobra. przestane)
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Title: Vey well done
Reviewed By: BabygrilKagome1015 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 13:28 CDT
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Very well done if i say so my self. i was amazed by this. i was confused as to what was chasing ryou ^_' then when it came to bakura bam. it hit me. cant wait to the next chapy.
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-(nsi) On: April 05, 2006 18:48 CDT
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Here's your pretty review. Now hurry up and give the reviewer a pretty update.... Wait, you mean I actually have to review it? Fine. It's interesting, meening I can't guess the entire plot from just reading the first couple chapters. Nice little twist on the Vampire genre. Keep me guessing.
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Reviewed By: sglily - nli On: April 04, 2006 22:28 CDT
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Wow. That was good! Very nice imagery and very well done descriptions. I could feel Ryou's terror as he was being chased and hunted. Loved how Ryou "released" Bakura from the crystals. And, Ryou's reward is to have his blood sucked from his neck! Love these two together (Ryou and Bakura)! I look forward to more story and to see how you progress with this! Great job!
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-(nsi) On: April 04, 2006 22:26 CDT
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Very interesting. I look forward to the next chapter. Update soon.
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