| "If you had only stayed in that picture" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Immortalninja On: October 22, 2006 21:08 CDT
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I really liked it.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 14:25 CDT
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u havent added a new chapter in a while!! this story is really good, but i need 2 know what happens after this!!
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Reviewed By: Arenja-too-lazy-to-log-in On: July 07, 2006 12:46 CDT
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HURRY UP AND UPDATE! This... is getting... annoying...
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Title: Nice...
Reviewed By: Raedah On: June 10, 2006 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story. Keep it up. Update soon please...
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Title: Woot!!!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 09, 2006 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Much Wuv, fun fic, thou I have a feeling things are about to get ugly....poor Gara. Out of curiosity how did Sasuke's brother know about their fight? Will you explain that in the next chapter? ^^' Love your fic! Update soon! XD
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 18:10 CDT
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I don't think I am going to continue reading this anymore. This is a great new-age fic with the characters of Naruto, but I do not like the fact that this is mot likely going to end up a NaruxSasu fic. I do not agree with it because of the situation and the events prior to the beginning of the story. Besides, I keep reading storied where Sauske does something bad to Naruto and they end up together anyway. I think that it's time for Sakuske to be kicked to the curb because I do not believe that Naturo is that weak willed. Nothing on your story, but I think that it's an idea that is over used. But you did a great job or writing this story. Hope you don't get discouraged or anything. I might be a nut. Ja!
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Title: Idea that you asked for
Reviewed By: Akahna On: April 06, 2006 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, I have an idea, you said you wanted them. Anyways, you could have Gaara and Itachi team up against Sasuke in a dark corner with Naruto by his side when they get out of the hospital. Then you could have Itachi turn on Gaara once Sasuke is knocked out and knock him out, only to attemt murder on Naruto. Then Naruto somehow escapes and brings Sasuke with him. They go to his appartment and Naruto tells the finally concious Sasuke that he's in love with him. [Instert whatever you want to happen next here]. Itachi shows up and tries to kill Naruto, only to knock out Gaara, who came out of nowhere. Gaara says that all he wants is for Naruto to be happy and challanges Itachi to a match. Gaara somehow loses, even with his sand attacks, and Itachi throws his knocked out body asside to advance on Naruto. Afetr that you can add whatever you like (just put in a battle scene, and you can skip the Gaara battle scene by saying '(insert number) hours/minutes/pathetic seconds later). It would be really wierd if you used my idea. I mean, it's a ten seconder, all my ideas are. (TW: a tenseconder is one of my ideas that take only ten seconds.)
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Reviewed By: Oneesan no Miroku Houshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 17:35 CDT
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One of my first Naruto fanfics was SasuNaru. You did a great job on this. I like your plot. Got a few errors, but it's nothing a good beta reader couldn't take care of. I could be your beta if you want. Just e-mail GuitarFan101@aol.com and I'll beta read it for you.
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Reviewed By: Bloodyclaws On: April 05, 2006 17:07 CDT
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omg this fic is awsome! i love the plot, its very original, you have some minor spelling mistakes but nothing too serious. i love sasu/naru fics ^_^ keep it up and i look forward to reading more!
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