| "The True and Wonderous History of Sir George O'Tech" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 21:28 CST
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Haha, great one-shot story. XD Poor 'sir' George.
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Title: FFRG Review
Reviewed By: Chibi Halo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 17:49 CDT
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First off let me apologise for the lateness of this review. With that said here's your review. Thank you for submitting this piece to FFRG. It was quite enjoyable. When I noticed you had submitted it for review I knew I had to read it just from the title alone. I loved this piece. The humor in the entire piece had me chuckling through the entire thing. I like how you took the classic story of Don Quixote and translated it into today's world. George reminded me of several people I interact with day to day with his multiple accounts on several MMORPGs. I loved how you were able to distort reality for George and show how his exploits affected people from several different viewpoints. That's the strong point of the story, the visualization you brought to the reader. I also liked how you explained concepts from legends and RPGs without sticking them in the middle of the story. I find that to be distracting at times. I did find some parts to be a little dry but the overall story drowned out the driness making it an enjoyable read. You have a very good grasp of grammar and flow which added to the delight of this piece. Not much more I can say other than to keep writing and keep on looking to improve your work. Once again thanks for submitting this piece to FFRG.
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Reviewed By: White_Winged_Atlantian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 18:08 CDT
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*Laugh* I love you Dumas. That was most awesome. It was a bit dry in some places and a little hard to follow but what with different perspectives and what not it was pulled off well.
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