Reviewed By: LaZyEnErGeTiC On: November 04, 2006 09:41 CST Comment/Review: nice. i like it too. it was a nice thing that you wrote for nee-chan :)
Title: Not so twisted Reviewed By: Buffy_Minamoji On: April 05, 2006 22:44 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: IT WAS GOOD! Don't say it's twisted! Only someone who understands pain can wright a story such as your. It's not twisted, it's a point we all fiuger out. *Sigh* Off the serious note ... I like this because you seemed to show us a Temari that most authers don't show! And with her being my favorte female characters I love reading storys that prove shes a character we change to match our will. ANYWAY! I loved it keep wrighting!