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| "Shallow Means, Deep Ends" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: WolfishSerenity On: July 01, 2006 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only thing that I have to say is...Wow. Just...wow. Very talented writing there, and you had me pulled into where I couldn't even hear the explosions of fireworks testing in the background here. A very sad fic, but I loved it. Big fan of Axel here. In any case, keep writing. Definitely. And oh... About the secret ending, I have a theory for the new KH3. Most people already know that, well, there's going to be new characters taking the lead, and it has something to do with the dark side of the Keyblade's powers. You know, since Sora was the one to make everything good and whole, that there is someone now using the keyblade for evil. The scene from the story takes place in a Keyblade graveyard sort of thing. One of the words mentioned there was Keyblade war, which tells you there's going to be some major conflict. Chasers, if you look it up, has something to do with metal work, sooOoo.. the creators of the keyblades might be taking a step in. And you remember Vexen, from KH:chain of memories, and how his death was never really final. And that his weapon was never made really clear. Somehow I have a feeling he'll be playing the role as big enemy numero uno for KH3. Eh.. my conspiracy theory. In any case, good writing, and definitely keep going.
| Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 00:06 CDT
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I know what you mean. I got to the Axel-death scene and I had to pause and cry. I mean, it's completely obvious. Roxas and Axel lurve each other. Axel is attracted to Sora because he's Roxas's flip-side. So, NATURALLY we can assume Axel is Riku's Nobody. It kind of drove me nuts that it was never mentioned or that Axel apparently didn't know, himself. Of course, we're not as dense as Sora is... but I digress. AND I'M RANTING! So sorry! This is about how great and painfully sad your fanfic is. It definitely brought back some KH memories. Nice job.
| Reviewed By: Senket On: May 15, 2006 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. That was depressing. But I loved it. And it more or less says exactly what I was thinking about their ways of reacting to each other. And I was so sad! T_T I can't believe they faded Axel T_T Axel should have been Riku's nobody. Really. So they would have gotten a sort-of happy ending by all 4 being together at the same time. In 2 bodies... ahem. Yes. I need to write a fic about Roxas being able to see what's going on from inside Sora. That should have some interesting character angst. Yes. Right.
| Title: Best FanFic EVER
Reviewed By: Dj On: May 14, 2006 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I instantly fell in love with this FanFic when i realized what you were aiming for. The one thing i thought the game lacked was another meeting of Roxas and Axel. You did Axel's character perfectly, speech wise. movements. overall I loved it. In my opinion, The Axel/Roxas pairing is so far the best. Please i beg of you, keep making them, i swear there is not enough at all. Again i thought you did this story perfectly a little depressing. (I cried like a baby when Roxas was fading) but yea, and i totaly agrre with you when you said the whole game was deppressing. Well, I love this FanFic, totaly #1 so far. Thank you for making a Axel/roxas paring that was actualy worth reading!
| Title: omg
Reviewed By: axellover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 10:02 CDT
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Omg that was such a great but yet so sad..I hate to stop and wipe my eyes at the end..I feel so sorry for sora and axel...you need to make a ending for axel when he fades away that would be great to read
| Reviewed By: NekoKaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Like he saw Kairi and he's all happy and stuff, but when he sees Riku he collapses onto his knees and starts balling all over his leg" I thought I was one of the only ones that really noticed that :P I jumped up and pointed at the TV like "HAH! KNEW IT!" I'm a silly boy >.> Aaanyway...that was a great fic. You really captured what I had been mulling over in my head, about the Nobodies really being able to feel in some way. The fic was depressing...but in a good way. I was cheering the whole way through the game for Roxas to somehow come back and let us see more of his story, eventhough I knew it wouldn't really happen the way I'd wanted it to *sigh* Maybe he'll make some appearances in the sequel though, huh? Can only hope. But anywho, more please ^^ There's so few fics here with Roxas even IN them, let alone any good Roxas slash
| Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: ScarrFace On: April 12, 2006 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave this all 10's because i love the whole story and it's true.To me it seems Nobodys like Axel can still feel in a way.I really like this story and if somebody doesn't there dingbats!^_^
| Reviewed By: Ciel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Depressing but good. Your not the only one that feels sad for the Organization, I pity them for not being able to feel emotions. Hell, I get choked up thinking about Roxas and the other members, and let me tell you that that does not happen often.
| Title: master of....socks?
Reviewed By: Ravyn_09 On: April 10, 2006 23:35 CDT
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Totally know what you meant by Riku meaning more to sora. I saw that scene, then i pointed to kairi "in your face! Did he cry when he found you? NO! haha!". anyway, I loved the fic. It was sad but awsome. now i have two fav pairs form this game rikuxsora and axelxroxas. keep writting. need more kh2 slash/yaoi goodness *grins*
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