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Title: Just a simpe review
Reviewed By: Sweetcakes [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 11:10 CDT
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I suppose this happened a few stories back, but even I know that quotation marks mean that someone is speaking! But anyway, on with my review...I may not be the best person for this, but I love your story! The characters are all in control, your not rushing through the scenes just to get through them (making it feel like you'd rather be doing something else). It feels like you're taking the time to flesh out the story, one chapter at a time (how was that for a stupid comment?) through the eyes of each of the main characters. You just keep to your own pace and don't let anyone get you flustered. I truely feel that you're doing an excellent job!!!!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 21:03 CDT
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LOve it please update soon!
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Reviewed By: peridot215 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 19:30 CDT
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i held my breath and i cried and i can't wait for you too update again. -San
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Reviewed By: Ryo-Truesdale (Lazy Member) On: May 18, 2006 09:58 CDT
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This is an awesome story. You really went in depth about Kagomes feelings. I like your example of breathing. Thats just amazing. Please keep updatings. And yeash, INUYASHA AND KAGOME FOREVER!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582(not signed in) On: May 18, 2006 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! the different colors are a little strange.. but other than that WONDERFUL! Please continue! Just FYI I'm a diehard Inuyasha/Kagome fan as well. Who the hell like that clay pot bi**h?! I feel a little sorry for Koga and Hojo sometimes but.. 99.9% inu/kag! anyway, keep up the fantastic work!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: flufy_maru_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great i love how you decided to make kagome bold like that, it's a great twist, please continue on...
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story , Please keep wriiting so I can grow to love even though i think i partly do already......anyway please update and I'll get back to you later.
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Title: good story
Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06_2 lazy to sign in On: April 21, 2006 08:43 CDT
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I hope you continue to write, I really like to read,and yours is so interesting that I jsut want to keep reading, keep posting and I'll read again, and post comments. Happy Writings, ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ryo-Truesdale [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Hate One-Shots That End Like This. Continue Your Story Now! Oops, Sorry, A Little Bit Too Agressive. Please, Please, Please Continue Your Story, It Would Mean A Great Deal To All Of This. This Story Should Be More Than A One-Shot!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It isa wonderful one shot but if you contine I would l0ve you for it. I want to see how you would go about doing it.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! you have to countinue please.!
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Reviewed By: Lady Orange On: April 06, 2006 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for writing this, it was an eccellent one shot.
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