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Reviewed By: Reincarnated Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow this story is so awesome!! I can't wait for another update!! ^_^ Keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: shikiori(nsi) On: June 10, 2007 13:28 CDT
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Baka! Me no likey cliffhangers! Wonderful story, great new chapter, but hurry up and update again!
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Reviewed By: Doggie_ear_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 11:15 CDT
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I don't get the summary but I'm not pointing a knife or am I???
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 23:59 CDT
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Very sad. Even with Kikyo releasing him. Sometimes I don't know if he actually deserves her. Even through that whole sequence he was still treating her as if there was no other in the world.It's too bad some sexy village guy doesn't start up after her and make that shit jealous. It would be no more than he would deserve for her suffering.
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 19:31 CDT
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very cool! I was JUST thinking (before i got to the part about kagome's makeover) that someone should write a story where kag changes her appearence. Either cutting or dying her hair, or if the person was writting a darker fic.. she could even like.. try to maim her face.. like cut it or something.. just like in despair. it's creepy i was even thinking of that neh? Anyway, I'm really excited to see your next chapter. Please don't abandon it!
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 13:47 CDT
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Luv it please continue
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Reviewed By: xSimplicity (nsi) On: July 29, 2006 11:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awe that was kinda nice of kikyou... i personally don't like her but i ll accept her for once lol great story =D
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Reviewed By: marbear411 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!Like tommorow or, the next day... well i don't care just update quickly please! I LUV YOUR STORY! I CAN'T WAIT UNTILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: June 28, 2006 12:46 CDT
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well that was odd, the last part of the chapter confused me, why was Inu human?
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Title: Lizzy1993
Reviewed By: Lizzy1993 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing it's really good and Inu/Kag all the way!
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Title: wow!!
Reviewed By: anime RuLeS u all [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i loved that story!! keep it up!! i can't wait until the next chapter is up!!! i am anxiously waiting for the next chapter of this great story!
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Reviewed By: katie_inuluvr On: June 01, 2006 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story! You have great ideas and so much emotion in your writing. I love the picture you paint for me in my head. I am a little confused about a part in your story though. In the first chapter when Kagome is going all crazy on Inuyasha and Kouga, she said that she can offer Inuyasha a family and Kikyo can't. While I think that's true and haven't really thought of it that way yet, I thought she could offer him acceptance and unconditional love. It might just be an difference in interpretations, and I do like the whole family idea. So I don't mean to discourage you, but just give you something new to think about. Unless you've already thought of this one. If that's the case, then it's just an observation. Please keep writing and I'm going to recommend this to my friends!(I only recommend really good fanfics to my friends.)
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Reviewed By: shadow of the star On: June 01, 2006 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best ffics i have ever read. i love it. please rite again soon ^-^
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Reviewed By: Nori of ninetails On: May 30, 2006 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the plot, your creativity, and writing style. but i think you could check some spelling error and put the writing in different text not making it look like a poem... Other than that, great story keep writing.:)
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Reviewed By: QuartetOfThree On: May 30, 2006 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
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I'm not sure why you have everything centered on the pages, but that is wrong unless you are writing a poem. It is also irritating and distracting. You should also never have two people talking in the same paragraph and you break most every other grammar rule there is too. Open up a novel or go look at the formatting of a good fanfic author like Sueric to see how they format their paragraphs and the dialogue. Your story might be more enjoyable if you followed basic grammar rules. I hope this helps.
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