Title: Fine
Reviewed By: Insane1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 15:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's fine, but have someone else read over it before posting. There were abundant (but slight) grammer issues. Not exactly spelling problems, but things like a word not being the proper tense and the like. It's easy enough to fix, so if you're good at proof reading then check it out yourself, or have a friend do so.
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