| "You want to live but if not now, when then ?" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: redox_equilibria [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wondered about the parents of Ino. Shouldn't they have heard the scream?
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Reviewed By: ClassicalTwist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 17:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good story, you should continue it. And you're too hard on yourself. There were hardly any spelling errors and it's all pretty peachy actually.
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