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"The Son Never Meant To Be:Book One" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ]
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 Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2002 00:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh...i got that name off from a japanese dictionary...i wanted to look for japanese names for vegetables, since the saiyans have names from vegetables...
 Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 22, 2002 21:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great fic so far! Very creative and original. And what's really freaky is that in this chapter you had a character named Daikon. In my story, "Something More", I have a character named Daikon, but he's Vegeta and Bulma's youngest son. Anyways, great chapter!
 Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 17, 2002 04:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well now, this was intresting. what happens next? I MUST KNOW!!!!!!!!! *huffs and puffs*
 Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 15, 2002 18:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was a really cool chapter. I hope you get the next chapter out very soon. :)
 Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 15, 2002 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very cute by the way I love this story so far...... Sounds like Bulma is going to have trouble on the Vegeta and mating issue. K anyways update soon! By the way great idea on mixing Gundam Wing into this.
 Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 18, 2002 12:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is getting good! Please go on. :)
 Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 11, 2002 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
You updated...wonderful!! I thought Vegeta wasn't so excited about the Guncore suits? *humph* whatever. I can't wait to the next chapter.
 Reviewed By: re-o-ko  On: April 06, 2002 11:49 CST
Comment/Review:
So bulma and vegeta meet! yah!! i can't wait to see what happenes next!! please continue as soon as possible! ^_^
 Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 19, 2002 16:50 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Glad you wrote another chapter. I liked it just as much as the first one. keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 19, 2002 16:47 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Glad you wrote another chapter. I liked it just as much as the first two. Keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 19, 2002 16:47 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Glad you wrote another chapter. I liked it just as much as the first two. Keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: Re-o-ko  On: March 19, 2002 15:45 CST
Comment/Review:
CONTINUE!!!! it's getting realy good!! he-he-he!
 Reviewed By: Kandy  On: March 12, 2002 11:42 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is great! can't wait to read the next chapters.
 Reviewed By: Re-o-ko  On: March 12, 2002 11:14 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW!!! you have such a great story!!! this is very original!! IT was so fun to read and i really got into the story!! I hope you will continue really soon!! and bring in Vegeta in some time too!
 Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 19, 2002 12:25 CST
Comment/Review:
ooooo Vegeii has a nice side in this story (sort of) will you plz put uo more i like this one it differnt.

:)mizu:P
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