"The Son Never Meant To Be:Book One" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 00:16 CDT Comment/Review: oh...i got that name off from a japanese dictionary...i wanted to look for japanese names for vegetables, since the saiyans have names from vegetables... |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 21:36 CDT Comment/Review: Great fic so far! Very creative and original. And what's really freaky is that in this chapter you had a character named Daikon. In my story, "Something More", I have a character named Daikon, but he's Vegeta and Bulma's youngest son. Anyways, great chapter! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2002 04:32 CDT Comment/Review: Well now, this was intresting. what happens next? I MUST KNOW!!!!!!!!! *huffs and puffs* |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 18:36 CDT Comment/Review: This was a really cool chapter. I hope you get the next chapter out very soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 15:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Very cute by the way I love this story so far...... Sounds like Bulma is going to have trouble on the Vegeta and mating issue. K anyways update soon! By the way great idea on mixing Gundam Wing into this. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2002 12:02 CDT Comment/Review: This is getting good! Please go on. :) |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2002 17:26 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: You updated...wonderful!! I thought Vegeta wasn't so excited about the Guncore suits? *humph* whatever. I can't wait to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: re-o-ko On: April 06, 2002 11:49 CST Comment/Review: So bulma and vegeta meet! yah!! i can't wait to see what happenes next!! please continue as soon as possible! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2002 16:50 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Glad you wrote another chapter. I liked it just as much as the first one. keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2002 16:47 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Glad you wrote another chapter. I liked it just as much as the first two. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2002 16:47 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Glad you wrote another chapter. I liked it just as much as the first two. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Re-o-ko On: March 19, 2002 15:45 CST Comment/Review: CONTINUE!!!! it's getting realy good!! he-he-he! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 12, 2002 11:42 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This is great! can't wait to read the next chapters. |
Reviewed By: Re-o-ko On: March 12, 2002 11:14 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WOW!!! you have such a great story!!! this is very original!! IT was so fun to read and i really got into the story!! I hope you will continue really soon!! and bring in Vegeta in some time too! |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2002 12:25 CST Comment/Review: ooooo Vegeii has a nice side in this story (sort of) will you plz put uo more i like this one it differnt.
:)mizu:P |
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