| "The Son Never Meant To Be:Book One" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 18:49 CDT
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Ugh! The suspense is whupping my ass! |
Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2002 20:44 CDT
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sorry about the delay!!!i had to get a new computer for my b-day, since i broke the computer i used to type and my dad wouldn't let me use his laptop, which is the only computer that connects to the internet in my house! well, now that i have a new one, expect to see one more chapter and the sequel...i'm already working on my third installment...it's going to be great!!! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: July 23, 2002 14:05 CDT
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even sadder. And greater.
Sorry about all those extra reviews. Do you think you could delete them? |
Reviewed By: Kandrisa On: July 23, 2002 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a sad, sad, sad, sad, way to come into power. So sad. I would have cried, but I'm at the libary. Very good, and sad. Okay-I'm finished |
Reviewed By: Kandy (not signed in) On: July 23, 2002 13:29 CDT
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wonderful!!! sorry it took so long to review. |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! OMG!! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!! THIS IS SUCH A GOOD FANFIC!! CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE SOON!!! Vegeta better not choose another mate....like he doesn't want a mate cause he doesn't wanna love anyone....so he stays mateless....virginy..blah blah blah....and then BULMA'S ALIVE!! AND BOOM!! they're happy again!! right??? RIGHT?? CONTINUE SOON! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 06:54 CDT
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Poor Vegeta! *tears well up in eyes* Please atleast let him not have a mate whatsoever. Let years rol by, he and Bulma reunite, and they fall in love the end *screams madly* |
Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 00:16 CDT
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oh...i got that name off from a japanese dictionary...i wanted to look for japanese names for vegetables, since the saiyans have names from vegetables... |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 21:36 CDT
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Great fic so far! Very creative and original. And what's really freaky is that in this chapter you had a character named Daikon. In my story, "Something More", I have a character named Daikon, but he's Vegeta and Bulma's youngest son. Anyways, great chapter! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2002 04:32 CDT
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Well now, this was intresting. what happens next? I MUST KNOW!!!!!!!!! *huffs and puffs* |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 18:36 CDT
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This was a really cool chapter. I hope you get the next chapter out very soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cute by the way I love this story so far...... Sounds like Bulma is going to have trouble on the Vegeta and mating issue. K anyways update soon! By the way great idea on mixing Gundam Wing into this. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2002 12:02 CDT
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This is getting good! Please go on. :) |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2002 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
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You updated...wonderful!! I thought Vegeta wasn't so excited about the Guncore suits? *humph* whatever. I can't wait to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: re-o-ko On: April 06, 2002 11:49 CST
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So bulma and vegeta meet! yah!! i can't wait to see what happenes next!! please continue as soon as possible! ^_^ |
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