| "Overhaul" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: lord sesshomaru2 On: May 24, 2006 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very excellent one-shot. please write another
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Reviewed By: Amaya Embrill [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really did enjoy the fic. Some of your sentences were a little awkward. They just didn't flow like the rest of the story. But I did find it enjoyable and hope you keep the good work coming.
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Reviewed By: Hideto-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice!! I totally loved it. Spicy yet still sweet!!
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Reviewed By: LainEverliving [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for this very enjoyable little fic. You've taken the concept and done it in the best sort of way: simple, but meaningful. I do wish more of the fics out there had the subtle and gentle charm of this one. So, very nice job. Ed and Winry make a great couple, and good stories like this really make you realize it. Once again, thanks.
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Reviewed By: :-) On: April 10, 2006 17:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I applaud you...very well written...i love ed/winry stories
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