| "Final Distance" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: lucid (too lazy to log in) On: June 21, 2006 20:45 CDT
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ah! i hope my email i sent u was sent properly; lemme know if it wasnt!
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Title: OMG IT WAS GREAT!!
Reviewed By: DPFan4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was amazing!!! I love how you wrote the battle seen with the fire going through the crack it was just so... COOL!!! No wait... it was STUDENDOUS!!! MAGNIFACENT!!! It's pretty must all those combined togather... stagnfacool? ...0_0... I just created a new word ^_^ anyways it was truely amazing the way you wrote it. I couldn't stop read, you have SOOOO MUCH TALENT!!!
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Reviewed By: Lucidangel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 20:56 CDT
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omg omg omg your new chapter was awesome; you're such a good writer!!!!! more more more more!! lol take your time; i love your style ^_________^
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Reviewed By: Lucidangel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
totally awesome!! i like this; you're really good at this. i like beyblade ^^ Haruka and Ryuu = totally awersome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^___________^ yayayayayayay love this!!!!
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Title: Sorry for not commenting in SO long
Reviewed By: DPFan4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Haruka and Ryuu KISSING!? AWWW it's so sweet. I HATE Yuri! I just wanna smack him in the face with one of those mideavl ball and chain with the spikes thingies. T-T poor Haruka... poor Ryuu... So is Haruka like a hybrid or something? This story is getting even MORE interesting by the chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! You seriouslly have a really AWESOME style of writing that makes the reader (especially me) CAN'T STOP READING!! I hope you'll post up chapter 5 soon ^_^.
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Title: OMG THIS STORY ROXERZ!!!
Reviewed By: DPFan4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yuri is an ASSHOLE!!! Grrrr poor Haruka T-T that was really mean what Yuri said to Ryuu. Haruka and Ryuu make a cute couple ^_^ nice chapter really, your writing is amazing. Oh and thank you so much for all the comments you've given me. The new picture of Minako sleeping on Trunks is a glimpse into Chapter 24. That's why while Minako was sleeping, tears were going down her face. Also the I used an outliner pen to outline the drawing. You can get it in an arts and crafts store ^_^
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Title: DUUUUUUUDE!!!!
Reviewed By: DPFan4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG DUDE!!! THIS IS SO AWESOME!!! OMG I MUST READ MORE!!! I LOVE THIS OMG I LOVE THIS FANFIC SO MUCH!!! You did such an AWESOME job writing this story!!! I am seriouslly amazed at how awesome this was written. AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME WORK!! Seriouslly!!!
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