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| "Kingdom Hearts Truth Or Dare!" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: yaaaaaaaaaaaaay
Reviewed By: konekocat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, those are a LOT of tens x'D i swear it's not because this chapter contained BL!!!! I just thought it was extra[Hey look Vex, and X!] funny! 8D But my FAAAAAAAAAAAAVORITE part, is when Axel and Roxas confess their obvious love for each other @w@ CUTENESS ABOOOOOUUUUNDS!!!!! Hahaha yay for Roxas on being able to lug that moping pyro out of the whale tank! And I'm glad blondie finally appeared in this chapter x3 BACK TO REVIEWING! Lol I like how this ended it was good~ Faving material dood! ker-FAAAAAAAAAAAAAAVE :D
| Reviewed By: konekocat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha this chapter actually made me Lol x'D I'm surprisedd Vexen prefers poker over Texas Hold e'm O_o And that Roxas isn't in these first couple chapters ;_; And that Vexen hasn't mentioned the word explicit, or se-*shot for being a pervert* ANYWAYS! Yes, I liked this chapter a lot more ^~^ But of course, the 1st chapter is always good too because that's what actually starts us off :D Oh! By the way! Your shounen-ai is just fine! It's pretty much the same as a het couple ^~^....except for the sex *cackles* ahem MOVING ON! It's a shame that the review before this one (for this chapter) was the first D': It was so unintelligent and did not contain any trace of constructive criticism DX tsktsktsk this deserves some 8D Also, I think it's delightful that you forced Sora to say nothing but cup o' noodles![I'm starting to crave some right now...] Such a cute litto thing *w* And onto the next chapteeeeer!!!
| Reviewed By: Kagome_the_Yorkie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WHY MUST YOU PUT SUCH HORRENDOUS STUFF IN PART 1? I mean, Sora and Riku are both STRAIGHT!!! Yeesh! And where's Aerith? Or Yuffie for that matter?
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