| "It's a Weird World After All" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf88 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 13:53 CST
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like it alot. please finish
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 13:55 CDT
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Can't believe I haven't found this story before now! It's really interesting and amusing-- please update soon! :3
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 02:43 CDT
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What's up, man? It says 'completed' and you haven't updated in a long time. Don't tell me you've given up on this one?! It was going so well! Figures...
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a major, huge, ridiculously obsessed fan of both FMA and Stargate. I am really enjoying this fic. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: kidloco. On: June 04, 2006 01:03 CDT
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lol, that was funny nneed read better tomorro, but the last line was funny, the world i was waiting to hear to wake up the bean (he goin to be mad to me XD) that was funny please nexxt chapter need sleep..
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Reviewed By: lorddane [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this story is amazing. You have some tallent dreaming this one up. My qualms lie in the grammar/spelling and the second half of the 4th chapter is itallicized. I think you have an excellent story going, please continue writing more. Best of luck, Lord Dane
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 18:41 CDT
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OMG! WTF!! This is the singular most fucked up story I have ever read. Hee hee. I love it. First of all, Jack, Teal'c and Sam are just so OOC that it's hilarious, and then Ed and Al are so IC that they're hilarious. Wow, this is a great combination. "Who are you calling a bean?!" Man, some of the things you write crack me up. I mean, geeze. Anyway, Hope you write some more, it would be a waste for this story to go into La-la land. Ja!
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Reviewed By: Wolves-eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was funny please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lady Sparhawk On: April 24, 2006 01:17 CDT
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Hey, I'm glad you updated! I was looking forward to it and I wasn't disappointed at all. It was a really interesting chapter with lots of action, which was good. I can't wait to see what happens now that Ed and Al are caught. But the Stargate people only think Ed is caught, right? I bet Daniel will be a little shocked when the find out that Ed is indeed a human. It was really funny when Daniel says that it's not like Ed would fall from out of nowhere, and then he does! Priceless. I think you're doing really well with the story (a bit more setting description might make it easier to follow in places though - just a suggestion so please don't be offended) so far, so I hope you keep up the good work. Thanks for the long chapter, and I hope we get to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not Logged in) On: April 20, 2006 12:07 CDT
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The kid was grinning.... Wow. This is a weird story. I have nothing much to say about it only because the fact that I have not read much of the story, and therefore, cannot make an acurate analogy of your writing style or our use of.....stuff. I will keep reading, however, and hope I can give you a better review later. Ja!
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Reviewed By: Little Miki On: April 17, 2006 16:41 CDT
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I realy like the story. Can't want till the next chapter is up.
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Reviewed By: Lady Sparhawk On: April 16, 2006 02:41 CDT
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Hey I really love your story, and I think it's good that you were descriptive with people's thoughts and stuff, because otherwise stories can be kind of silmple and not that interesting. But your story is really interesting, so I'll be looking forward to more! I love the idea and can't wait to see where you go with it, coz I haven't seen a FMA Stargate crossover before. I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: NaphtaliPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 19:21 CDT
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A very enjoyable read thus far, I rather like the idea of the Elric brothers ending up in the SG-1 world. It's a pleasant change of pace from all the FMAxHP crossovers out there. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
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Title: SG-1
Reviewed By: MathGirl On: April 13, 2006 23:35 CDT
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I had no idea that other people both watch stargate sg-1 and read manga. Sam Carter is cool, and McKay is NOT. I'm suprised O'Neil isn't fishing (he always trys to drag Sam along XD). Well any way... have you seen the episode in which Sam and O'Neil meet? Lets just say that Hamond tells O'Neil that Sam is his intelecutal supirior. LOL to see Jack's face...
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Reviewed By: Catylina On: April 09, 2006 23:49 CDT
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Oh please please write more as soon as possible!!! This is an obsoultly kool story and I love your writing style! more please.
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