| "It's a Weird World After All" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: tusunami47 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 23:39 CDT
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You know... this story was on my favorites list for a long time and then I removed it becasue you didn't add any more chapters for a long time. I'll add it back cause you finally did... but I'll remove it again if you stop... I really don't want to do that. I like this story.
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Reviewed By: Pacifica2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 18:44 CDT
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Very good i enjoyed it very original keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: dawn m [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wish you would update ive read 3 times now and want to know what happens next - its a great fic
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 20:48 CDT
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Yay, you updated! *does happy dance* Chapter was good and I understand how life gets. mmm, if you get your book published let us know since I would go find it. Good job =)
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 13:20 CDT
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Thank you for finally updating! I was beginning to lose hope.
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Reviewed By: Comechatcha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 11:22 CDT
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Poor Elrics. Or, should I say, poor SGC. Glad to see you back writing this. Can't wait for the next instalment.
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 09:55 CDT
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You updated! :D This has to be my favorite chapter, by far. And yes, writing/publishing a book, combined with stress of any kind, is a very good reason for being delayed. Glad to know that you're feeling better!
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 22:27 CDT
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Well... If you were putting off updating this story because of school... It should be over by now (unless you're in Australia or something). Some sort of notice as to if/when you'll update would be lovely. Or even better yet, an update! However, if there's something going on that's important, then I'm sorry. I hope that you get past whatever is keeping you from updating (forgetfulness, writer's block, real life issues). :3
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Reviewed By: otakutron [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update i just found your story today and want to read to the end
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 02:20 CDT
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Please update, I even went to ff.net and found it there only to see that you hadn't completed it there either. *sighs* I love this and putting Jake and Ed together is just priceless, so please update.
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 23:07 CST
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Man, it's been ages since you updated! DD: Please tell me you're going to eventually!
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Title: I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: TwilightSeraphim On: January 12, 2007 13:21 CST
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The title says it all. i know i sent you a review before, but please update or at least post a notice! Thanks!
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Title: LOVE THIS FANFIC!!!
Reviewed By: TwilightSeraphim On: January 08, 2007 13:50 CST
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PLEASE continue writing this fanfiction! i love how you combined these two series together, so please update! FMA forever!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 05:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great way to wake him up!! Will that affect his abilities with alchemy? Hope not. Glad they stopped shooting Al. WHy didn't Ed respond when Daniel tgalked to him originally? Keep up the great work!!!
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Reviewed By: _ On: November 19, 2006 23:37 CST
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Hate to point this out, but the usual reaction to unauthorized offworld gate activation is a prompt "Close the iris!" followed by a) the iris closing and the incoming whatever going splat b) "Sir, there seems to be a problem!" and the iris failing to close, followed by something getting through or c) the iris closing but some really dang wierd thing happening. Also, Jack seems to be very out of character, he is usually only that annoying when being held prisoner and/or in the midst of some huge crisis when he can't really do anything but be annoying. The rest of the cast is also at least mildly out of character. Sorry to be negative, I hope you don't take offense. Feel free to ignore me, as it seems there are a number of others who enjoy this fic.
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