Reviewed By: Wildfires Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2002 02:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Poor Tro-chan and Relena. I feel so bad for them since they can't be together. Nice ficcie though. The only thing that stuck out in my mind is that you have a thing for using the word moan. Maybe you should hit a thesaurus. Change it up a bit. Otherwise, Nicely done. ^_~ |
