"Shiryou: Wicked Wishes" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Master Yoshi On: September 17, 2004 10:35 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: evil dead! cool! i want more! add in goku and gohan and videl and chi-chi!
|
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 18, 2002 03:33 CDT Comment/Review: Hey K, just wanted to let you know that JB's computer took a dump. She posted a notice to her readers that she is unable to update her fics and since I haven't seen a review by her in a couple of days, I figured that she can't do that also. Just thought you might like to know. TTYL |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 16, 2002 03:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow, I don't know what to say. This is amazing. I would go as far as to say that it kind've reminds me of WYWG. Please forgive me for not having reviewed this sooner. I thought I had back in April, but I guess I spaced it. I have a good excuse though, I was on some major pain killers and I obviously got a bad case of cranial diarrhea O_o. Anyway, I give this fic an A+ and I absolutely can't wait to read more ^_^. TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 01:40 CDT Comment/Review: *looks around frantically* Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Uuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppdddddddddddddddddddaaaaaaaaatttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee *deep breath* Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo... |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2002 23:30 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Sorry it took so long for me to review but I swear my English teacher hates me. As a matter of fact I'm supposed to be doing an essay right now. But I'm not so HaHa! Take that Mrs. Smith! *pinches bridge of nose while shaking head* I'm going to flunk out of school.
Anywho, awesome chapter! Poor Goten! That damn Trunks has gotten him into more trouble than he could handle this time! Sorry I had to find someone to blame this on since Goten is my favorite chibi (don't tell Trunks!) I guess I could blame it on you but you can't be held responisble for the workings of your...um...unique mind. ^_~ J/K lol.
Anyway can't wait for the next update which I know will be a lot quickier than the last one. *hint hint* Don't worry no pressure I'm- wait I can not tell a lie, LOTS AND LOTS of pressure!!!! Update, update, update, update, update... *walks away still chanting.*
PS. What's with you and Trunks' hair color? |
Reviewed By: AuthorKrisKnight On: March 14, 2002 21:27 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Story kept you engaged and interested without boring you with too many details. I can't wait for the next installment |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: March 14, 2002 21:26 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Story kept you engaged and interested without boring you with too many details. I can't wait for the next installment |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2002 23:28 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You've done it again! Another great start to what seems to be another great story. I like the new character and I can't wait to see what our good friends the Briefs think of him. Can't wait to see where you go with this.-JB |