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| "Solo Adventures of Youko Kurama" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: ...
Reviewed By: Raizen(NLI) On: July 13, 2006 19:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
You miss spelled Women with wemon, but other then a few spelling and grammar issues i like it. Just run it through spell check, hey no ones perfect.
| Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Kitsune-rosa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 07:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I can see that you really have talent for writing. Your idea is creative, and it is really interesting and cute. I really like it so far. The only thing that could be fixed is the spelling mistakes. There are not many of them, but there are enough to be noticable. Other than that, I hope you can keep going with it. I'll be looking for updates:)
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