|
| "Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Title: O.O
Reviewed By: KiraxKira (Not signed in) On: June 06, 2006 19:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
~SOBS~ You forgot about us? ~CRIES HARDER~ LOL! Hope all is well. ^_^ Still here. ^_^
| Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: KiraxKira (Not signed in) On: May 07, 2006 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am very pleased to know you're well. ^_^ Rin's training is obviously important to the story and to her character. For every detail you have written has relevance, I am sure of this. ^_^ I was not bored in the least. I'm actually quite curious. LOL! I see that you have been extremely busy with finals and such. This explains a lot. ^_^ Not that it's any of my business, but very glad you explained that. I will be more patient for final chapters. ^_^ Good luck on your tests and...don't worry...I'll be here when you've written next chapter. ~Places glue on chair and sits upon it~ LMAO! I won't move from this spot! O.O Wait! I should have gone to the restroom before I did this. ~Scoots across floor using feet to glide chair to bottom of staircase~ Ok, now how do I get upstairs? ~Scratches head~ HA HA HA! Yes, I'm warped in the mind! Anyhow, good luck! ^_^
| Title: O.O
Reviewed By: KiraXKira (Not signed in) On: April 30, 2006 12:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hope all is well with you. Haven't seen a new chapter in a while. ^_^ Take care! ^_^
| Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: KiraXKira (Not signed in) On: April 16, 2006 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story is shaping up very nicely. ^_^ I am enjoying this quite a bit. I think you are writing this with a great amount of concern. ^_^ Keep going! Great job so far! ^_^
| Title: Hope
Reviewed By: angeluswilliam1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 09:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am finding this fic interesting and hoping everything works out for the best.
| Title: OOOPS!
Reviewed By: KiraXKira (Still not logged in) On: April 12, 2006 12:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
HA HA! ~Scratches head~ I realize my mistake now. I wrote 'Title' in last review as chapter three. HA HA! To my surprise you have it listed as chapter four. I forgot about author notes. LOL! ^_^ Trivial, yes, but I wanted to corret myself. ^_^
| Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: KiraXKira (Not signed in) On: April 12, 2006 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is actually very interesting. It kind of worries me what you may have planned for the next chapter, but this chapter wasn't bad at all. I'm impressed with your writing skills. Even if you're self-conscious about the content of your own story, you do not lack in talent as a writer. Anyhow, I'm still here...reading. ^_^ Good luck!
| Title: Good luck
Reviewed By: KiraXKira [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, this is a very touchy subject, but not unheard of. Sadly, I have story of my own to tell. My niece was abused by my brother. I have yet to get over that. She was barely 3 when the abuse began, or so we assume. She can barely recall how old she was, but she recalled a certain incident during one of the nights he attacked her, and it lead us to believe she was around the age of 3. Anyhow, we didn't find out until she turned 10. It was the saddest day and the most tearful of my life. The only reason we even found out was because she went to school and talk to her teacher. The school was having a full week of child abuse awareness. And the only reason she talked to her teacher was because my brother had threatened to do the same things to her younger sister if she didn't continue to do the things he wanted her to. She wanted it all to stop. And she didn't want her sister to got through what she went through. Her sister was 3 at the time. When we found out what he HAD put her through...we were speechless. To hear the aweful things she had endured for all those years because he would threaten to hurt the ones she loved...how aweful and cruel! I know I shouldn't hold grudges against my brother, but I do. I want justice for what he did to her, but how can you take away all that pain? Sure, he's in jail...sure he's paying for his actions, but how do you heal the mind? She's now 21 yrs old. Yes, some people can move on and make a better life for themselves, but how do you heal the mind that can't move past the pain? She still can't have a normal relationship with a man. She fears them. It's quite sad. I pray for her often. Anyhow, even though I should be offended a lil' with the content of the story, I understand why you feel the need to write this story. I suppose it'll help you get past your anger...take it out on the characters involved in this story. Maybe this way you can get a lil' justice too. Please continue. I will promise to read.
|
|
|
