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| "Shadow and Light" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Saiyamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOT AGAIN, GODAMMIT. I liked your GW fic, so I went and checked this one out. A suggestion? From now on, don't have the two fics mimic each other. It's word-for-word in enough places, that if I didn't love the two stories, I'd be sick of 'em. I notice that the magic worlds in your fic echos each other. Where do you come up with it? it it from a book? I also reconized the 'Does your mother know...' conversation. Tamora Peirce is great. I hope to read more of both your fics, I just don't want to be reading it twice(though if an idea's a good one they do say to stick with it*lol*) Truthfully, I don't think you need to repeat sceenes, your writing is good, and your imagination is to. And yay for yaoi, and YuGiOh, and other good things that start with Y. And yay for the sexy bastards like Bakura, and kick ass Ryou and Yugi.
| Reviewed By: Asaka_Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 08:36 CDT
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I really like this fic so far! I happen to notice though, that in your Gundam Wing story the exact same bar scene happens with Relana and Quatre as it does with Bakura and Yugi. I didn't know if you realized this or if you did it on purpose, but I just wanted to give you a heads up.
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