| "Unseen Light" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Mountain Dew Soda 17 On: September 09, 2007 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That's a good story. I'm hooked. Sorry, but I saw a few spelling mistakes. just ones here and there such as forgetting to add a 's' at the end of a plural and such. When will you update? Soon I hope.
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Reviewed By: Dragon of the west On: September 02, 2006 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had another idea that could help you maybe you can write about the plants leading kurama into a secret garden and yoko finds him bonding or giving them some energy, whatever anyway hope to hear from you soon!
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Reviewed By: dragon of the west On: July 24, 2006 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great! you"re anatural please write more and keep up the great work
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