| "Wasurenai yo - I won’t forget" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sadie Woods On: March 06, 2007 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't help but get so involved in this story. It's facinating how this whole thing is playing out, and I can't wait to see what the real resolution is.
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 01:00 CDT
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When is the reunion gonna happen!? No refunds, huh? You broke it, ya bought it. Please! 1x2! I'll start a coup! I liked this long chappie, by the way.
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 02:12 CDT
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I demand a refund! That was far too short and I waited so long! And the suspense! I'm this close to strangling you! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre nsi On: August 01, 2006 10:34 CDT
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We need more HeeroxDuo interaction coming up soon! But so far another intruiging chapter:)
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre nsi On: July 09, 2006 10:16 CDT
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A month?! A whole month...*sniffles* You made me wait that long? It was worth it in the end, but! It would help if you were to update sooner? * Hopeful look * Please! I wanna see a 1x2 reunion!
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre nsi On: June 10, 2006 23:50 CDT
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Yay an update! Ihope the next isn't far off! I want Heero to find him!
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Reviewed By: Saiuamaru-nli On: June 05, 2006 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
People love the fic, and people want the fic to be updated. They also want the update to be a New chapter. What there is so far is wonderful. However, a new chapter would be even more wonderful. Lets get going with the more wonderfulness.
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 23:11 CDT
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???... Update!
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Update Dammit! You're story has been favourite-listed by me, so don't dissapoint! I love ths story so far! *kicks the pink wilderbeast*
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Title: FFRG Chapter 2 Review
Reviewed By: hostilecrayon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 04:38 CDT
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Ah, the plot thickens. I was pretty sure he was dead. Bonus points for surprising me. The flow is a little better in this chapter, as are the typos. I liked how you used the people who found Duo be the ones who give an idea of what happened afterwards. A few things I noticed that were odd: As far as I know, a person cannot live for two weeks without water. I believe the longest is seven days for water, and three weeks for food. It feels a little unrealistic. Also, if he continuously bled for two weeks, he would die from blood loss alone. Perhaps you could shorten the time period to a couple days instead of weeks. Very interesting piece. I'm looking forward to more. Thank you for submitting to FFRG!
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Title: FFRG Review - Chapter 1
Reviewed By: hostilecrayon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 04:08 CDT
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This is an interesting piece, though you may want to label it as Divergance instead of Alternate Universe. The ending is very affecting. It's just the kind of cliffhanger that both shocks the reader and leaves them wanting and hoping for more. However, some of your writing isn't as engaging as it could be. You tell the story, but you don't suck the reader into the story. I would suggest rewording things and reading the story out loud to test for flow. The prose comes out stilted at times. It also has quite a few typos and some problems with tense, and I would recommend a beta for that. You should be able to find one in the Beta/Pre-Readers section at the Media Miner forums. A Pre-Reader should be able to help you with flow as well. I wonder how the 1+2 turns into 1x2x1 if Duo is dead. Mysterious, and it has perked my curiousity. Thank you for submitting to FFRG and I look forward to future submissions!
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Reviewed By: Tiatha On: May 14, 2006 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant, another chapter. I really like the way you portrayed Relena, it was honest and didn''t turn her into some totally insane vindictive monster. She's just a bit young and selfish. I like the relationship you've built up between Quatre and Heero, and poor Wufei!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: May 12, 2006 03:47 CDT
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will you be revealing duo's whereabouts the next time around? i can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: April 29, 2006 22:48 CDT
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update again please!
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Reviewed By: tUATHA On: April 29, 2006 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Phew, thank God he's alive, I like your OCs alot which is unusual and I think Tamara's insistence concerning alien care is great! Please update soon!
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