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"Determination of the Damned" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]

Title: FFRG
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 20:14 CDT
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In the beginning I had to question some of the details as being slightly excessive, but overall, chapter one was awesome! There were a few small errors with commas, spelling (parish instead of perish when Icellina risks herself for Gabriel after the carriage raid), and there was one instance of using then instead of than. From this first chapter, it really seems as if this story has direction and purpose. This chapter was also well-written and I genuinely enjoyed reading this. Thank you very much for submitting to FFRG! --Dee

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