"Freedom fighters" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: ms Reviewed By: inuyasha's bride On: June 20, 2006 00:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: it is prefect i have never read anything like this i gave it a perfect 10 because i've heard good things about this story. corina name should be loud mouth. and kiki i have come up with one yet.
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Title: ideas Reviewed By: Oroshirai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 11:40 CDT Comment/Review: why don't you ask your fans to give you some ideas?
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Reviewed By: Morita Ayumi On: May 26, 2006 09:17 CDT Comment/Review: Are you going to continue? It's really good!! Please say that you are!!
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Title: Please Write some more Reviewed By: Oroshirai On: May 15, 2006 07:35 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please update and i forgaot to mention that i just started to read this fanfic so i hope you can forgive me for turning in these names late. i think that you should just use the names from the manga.
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Title: Please Write some more Reviewed By: Oroshirai On: May 15, 2006 07:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please update and i forgaot to mention that i just started to read this fanfic so i hope you can forgive me for turning in these names late. i think that you should just use the names from the manga.
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Title: Freedom Fighters Reviewed By: Teusa Kougar On: May 15, 2006 07:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Your Story is great so far but don't forget to update like so many other fanfic writters. I want you to know that there are other good writters out there. Go looking for them and see how they write so that you can enhance your story. This Review written by Oroshirai.
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Title: Review for your TMM story, PLEASE CONTINUE IT XD!!!!! Reviewed By: Morita Ayumi (Kish/Dren/Kisshu is my torture subject XP) On: April 17, 2006 20:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Really good for your first fanfic. It's good, but you need to get the cyniclons more involved. They can't just sit there and do nothing! >.< You chould have Dren/Kisshu go and try to find Zoey/Ichigo or something. I loved the catnip part!! That was hilarious! ^^ Anyway, please continue!
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