| "The Painting of the Mind" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mou!! That was great stuff!! I completely loved the fic throughout, because it had the artistic theme... That's the best ending ever XD Thanks for writing it!
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Reviewed By: Shio-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. I absolutely loved it.It was interesting to read and I loved the detail!
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Reviewed By: akito_sweet_insanity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 22:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was great! I was becoming so depressed as I read the fic that I almost stopped reading it altogether--but then, Soubi said he wasn't going to give up even if loneliness did seem to be Ritsuka's fate. And he proved it. And I felt that even a dark, lonely destiny like Ritsuka's could be overcome by love. Beautiful! Especially that last line, where the painting became more beautiful after it was ruined because the image of a lonely Ritsuka was gone. That was sheer genius!
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Reviewed By: Lina Inverse The Dramata [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. It's sad he destroyed his picture. And interesting how you described the thoughts and emotions of the characters. And yay for the hot kiss! Ritsuka needed the good snogging. It was a very bittersweet story. Brava.
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Reviewed By: HER - Not Logged In On: April 10, 2006 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tht was amasing, much better than the 1 i wrote, i havent post it ^ yet thou & im not going 2 wow u had gereatidea, wonerful! ^^
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