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| "Dimension Gate" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Reviewed By: Rose Wnner On: November 14, 2007 04:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story its the only differnt universe one i've read and was able to enjoy it.pleas update soon.
| Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 03:57 CDT
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I can't wait to read more! Please update soon I love the story. As for couples Duo/Heero lol.
| Reviewed By: deathrow executioner On: May 25, 2006 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love what you've written so far but can you please put Duo/Heero? thank you! =]]]]
| Reviewed By: Saiyamaru(nli) On: May 15, 2006 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No No No NO NO NO!!!!! IT WAS GETTING REALLY INTERESTING! Gah. Please, please! Update soon, this is great, I want to read more! It's been a while since a fic has caught my interest the way this one has. Present day characters tossed into a land of magic. Very interesting. I enjoy the mix of cynicalism thrown into a seeming land of fantasy. I also like how you portrayed the characters, and I look forward to reading more. I love a good 3X4, but can I expect other pairing? I meen, Zechs is very jaded, and Duo is only for the sex, but I'm something of a romantic...(Don't tell anyone. My reputation as a perverted bastard would suffer.) So, is it a possability? The more Yaoi, the better....
| Reviewed By: Asaka_Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 16:39 CDT
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This is a really good fic! You obviously take the time to spell and grammar check, and you write beautifully. If you want input on the relationships, I'll toss out my opinion. Trowa/Quatre is obvious, though I think there should be toss in of Wufei/Duo, simply because Wufei will be able to handle Duo's attention-seeking ways. Relena and Heero will make a nice couple, and Sally and Zechs would have an excellent, although unexpected, relationship. Treize seems to me that he should remain single, as he is quite pleased to do so.
| Reviewed By: jumpy monkey On: May 12, 2006 10:40 CDT
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Yay, they finally met! For other pairings, I vote for 13x6. They seem to have a bit of a connection already, although now that I think of it...13x5 seems to have more...how do you feel about threesomes?
| Reviewed By: Meadhbh On: April 24, 2006 10:53 CDT
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Oooh, this is getting good. The portal is opening, and it sounds like Quatre is feeling the emotions of someone on the other side... dare I think it's Trowa? Hm. There must be some sort of connection still there, for him to pick up on him (if it is him) so quickly. I wonder how they'll react when they come face to face again! I loved Q in this chapter, by the way. So many people seem to forget that he was a Gundam pilot too, and write him as this sweet little flower. He's a naturally compassionate person, but he certainly isn't weak. And I'm glad you enjoyed my review. I think I promised to review every chapter, so I'll do my best--I know it's frustrating to write when no one seems to be reading. Oh! One more thing: you may have told us this somewhere and I'm just not seeing it, but could you let us know how old the Maxwell siblings are? I'm just kind of curious. Relena sounds like she's a teen of some sort, but I have no clue about the other three. I think that's it for this review--just take it as a given that I paraded around holding up 1x2 and 3x4 flags and tossing confetti and cookies to the masses, kay? :)
| Title: Dimension Gate
Reviewed By: Meabhdh [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 11:45 CDT
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Oh, I'm really enjoying this so far! I admit I have a serious weak spot for GW fantasy fics, and this one is hitting quite a few of my buttons at the moment. You write quite well, and so far your plot is pretty original--do continue quickly!! You've already captured my interest, and I'm dying of curiousity as to where you're going to take this. I'm enjoying your charactizations so far--they're believable, but still original. Especially Duo. I admit he's a favourite of mine, and I was a bit surprised by him so far in this fic, but I can definitely see him like this. I do hope his character develops into something more as the story goes on, though. Your Trowa is intriguing. He does talk more, but--so far, anyway--he still manages to be rather an enigma, like the canon pilot. We haven't seen that much of Wufei or Heero yet (my other favourite pilot!), but I would say your Quatre is bang-on. The punk attitude is an interesting switch, but it fits him, and he still somehow manages to be sweet while having a core of steel. Okay, I'm done dissecting your story now (sorry if I got too analytical!) I just have one more thing to say and then I'll leave you alone... please please please pair Duo up with Heero! I'm a diehard 1x2/3x4 fan, and as you've already got one of those set up, I can devote all my energy to begging shamelessly for Heero and Duo. I'll grovel if you want me to. Or bake you cookies. I love your characters so far and your story has me hooked, and if you set those two up together I'll review every chapter telling you how wonderful you are. (Yay for bribery!) Write more soon!
| Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooo, I really am loving this, please hurry and update soon. Cant wait for the next chapter.
| Title: (zolalita@gmail.com)
Reviewed By: Zola Lita On: April 11, 2006 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. Poor Quatre... I think this fic is really promising. Personally, I'm looking forward to what happens next so, please continue! :3
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