| "Never Okay" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 03:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Seriously, Mokuba sounds really hot. Makes me wanna see a pic of him at 16. I'm not sure what posessed me to read this.. I'm usually not into incest. I think my perv-o-meter went up a notch. o_o Oh well, lol. Anyway, I like this fic. Its like late they both just do it randomly, they actually struggle with this. Hopefully the next chapter is hot. If it is, I'll forgive you for not updating for so long, lol.
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Title: niice
Reviewed By: Mai-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 09:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was real niiice keep it up!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: dukesgirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love ur story, pleaz write more, i need to know what happens next.
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Title: dukesgirl13
Reviewed By: dukesgirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love ur story, pleaz write more, i need to know what happens next.
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Title: Lovely!
Reviewed By: Nekosune! On: June 28, 2006 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! Update soon for more yamyams! That was awsome!
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Reviewed By: Ayeshagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay... they're gonna fuck like rabbits... i mean *cough* make love *cough* *grins* nice chapter, i bet mokie's pervy friend will be listening through the door!
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Reviewed By: vixie_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 22:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
wicked sad, yeah? Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Defense Attorney for the Clinically Insane On: June 04, 2006 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my GOD!! How can this story be so fucking hilarious, and yet so damn sad at the same time. Ugh, that's why I hate narrow minded people, they judge and humiliate what they don't understand. People like the gothic jock will DIE!! *bristles with anger* But the story is good, I love the story. Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_~
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Reviewed By: jenny aka sesshykoi0106 On: June 02, 2006 21:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was interesting i love seto hes so hot and sexy and smart and *someone yells in the audiance) shut the fuck up! *sesshykoi0106 pulls out a ak47 and shoots the person* anyways please update this excellent story!!
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Reviewed By: silvermyst On: May 13, 2006 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, not quite what I was expecting ( I was expecting like 3 chappies or more with how long we have waited :P lol) And not to mention I was already an emotional wreck borderline on crying some massive tears...I really dislike being female sometimes(but only once a month :P lol) Oh well...want more, and soon. Sick or not :P *Hands you a bowl of homemade chicken noodle soup to show that she honestly does sympathize with you no matter how bad she wants the next chappie* Later *^.^*
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Nekosune! On: May 12, 2006 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Cookies and pocky for you! Wonderful angst! ^_^ I'll give you yamyams if you update soon and I hope you feel better soon! ^_^
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Title: More please!
Reviewed By: SilverMyst On: May 01, 2006 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To put it simply? Me likey!!! *^.^* lol. Please write more, I'm really getting into this and then...well, they are just starting to bond and you left me hanging...That's not nice *T.T* lol. Anyway, I hope to see you continue this as soon as possible. You had 7 chappies in one day, then the one 10 days later...I'm expecting to see one soon. *^.^* I even promise to review it. *^.^* Later.
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Reviewed By: Ayeshagirl On: April 21, 2006 16:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
You can't not put the lemon on here you evil cow! Everyone else does! *growls* Anyway, keep up the good work.
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