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Reviewed By: PotatoPuff [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 19:52 CDT
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Hey, pretty good for constantly complaining about posting stories online. Just a suggestion; watch your grammer. What I mean is, where you're placing things like semicolons. I saw one spot where you split a sentence in the wrong place with a semicolon, I just can't remember where. Someone was talking at the beginning of the chapter when you did it, I think. The storyline's pretty good though, and I can't wait to read more! Let's hope your wrists recover soon. ;) PP & TT

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