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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2009 17:49 CDT
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This is a wonderful story full of creativity. I've noticed that you haven't updated in over three years, and I hope that you are okay.
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Reviewed By: asialisek [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was a little worried at the beginning of the story.. but... wo~~w.. i really really like the twist in storyline~ and the originallity behind your idea~ very neat. n__n i read your comment about your grammer, but really, it isn't that glaring. a nice Beta would probably be able to help you clean that up a little, but as it is, the erros here and there don't really get in the way~~~~ *hugs** besides, when you have a kute story like yours, we're willing to overlook such trivial things~ **laughs** please write more, please share it with us!! **adds to favs**
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Title: Hope_Poe26
Reviewed By: Hope_Poe26 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. Why haven't you updated recently? All I ask of you is that before December is over, could you post a new chapter? It'd be a great gift to tide me over the holidays and await patiently for the next chapter over the new year. Oh magnificent author, this humble reader asks of you to grant this humble wish.
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 23:43 CDT
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Interesting, I thought the party would have had a few fun accurences but the cuddle scene was delightful enough. ;3
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Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 23:31 CDT
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Ooo, we're making progress with the brothers. Sesshomaru combed Inuyasha's hair and Inuyasha felt comfortable enough in his brother's presence to fall asleep. I can't wait to see Inuyasha The Spy! This story is keeping me on my toes--I don't know what's going to happen next! Love it!
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I guess Sesshoumaru isn't as in control as he thinks eh? Great chapter. Sure brightened my day!
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Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 22:20 CDT
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Oooh, they've made Inuyasha pretty! I'm so excited. Poor Inuyasha--years of living on his own with meager provisions and now he's forced to dress and act like Sesshomaru's consort. Well, at least he won't be unhappy about the consort part. I'm sure there will be interesting days ahead for our hero as he moves into his potential mate's rooms. I loved Sesshomaru's reaction--enthralled by his brother's beauty yet scared of his own feelings. It was well done, as was Kagura's placement. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagura's hilarious and I think I see a catfight on the horizon between the OFC and Inuyasha (although it won't be much). I can't wait to see Inuyasha acting as Sesshomaru's consort...that's going to be good. Slamming doors is bad =). Great update!
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
slaming doors is a very bad habbit ^.~
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Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sure the tongues will be wagging in the next chapter. The little power struggle between Sesshomaru and Inuyasha was cute, and I loved how Kagura input her two cents into their problems. Really, Sesshomaru is just being an ass because he needs to feel superior to his brother in something, and as he couldn't handle the siege on his lands himself, he has to revert to ignoring Inuyasha and calling him a half-breed. Prick. Anyway, poor Inuyasha. He's doing everything he can to get his brother and potential mate to notice him, and the bastard is just treating him like dirt. It would serve Sesshomaru right if Inuyasha just left him to his own devices. About your grammar--I've noticed the errors, but I haven't commented because really, there's nothing glaring. It's not as if you write like this: Inuyahsa wented to see Shesshomaru becuase he likedt him alot. So, as long as it's written in English and is fairly legible, I'm not going to complain. If you want, you can find a beta reader to handle your grammar issues for you (but I would suggest you be very discerning on who you pick to read your stuff because you wouldn't want a beta with worse grammar than yourself). About the reviews--meh. You can reply to them if you want, but I'm sure you read them so it doesn't matter all that much to me. Hope this helps, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, I'm late on leaving reviews. I've been reading this fic for some time now and I must say, your doing a good job. You have an excellent plot and I really hope to see more in the future. I just wish that there was more to it... So, I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner. There is no excuse for that and all that. So, yeah. I was wondering how you came up with the wind element for Inuyasha, why Sesshomaru is still being so cold with him. Is Naraku truly just going to let Inuyasha slip away? Well. Here's hoping you update soon. Punished by Tryst
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 23:19 CDT
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I was wondering when Kagura would come back. Glad to see she's here gain, and still walking around liek she owns the place!
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 23:13 CDT
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Delightful!!!!!!!
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Title: go you!
Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to deserve medals and awards for this fic... whatever I could hope to say has already been said by other reviewers... this fic rocks! It's sooo unlike anything I've seen out there, and trust me, creativity is cooool. I love how you've given Inuyasha his air spirit element, and you've managed to keep him within his basic character. Sometimes people change characters too much to be able to follow... but you've somehow captured how to change a character's abilities just enough to make them match the story and the series. Thanks for Inuyasha's outburst... I agree with LadyIvy, everyone treats Inuyasha like he's a worthless watchguard dog. Poor Inu =O. Well keep updating! You've got me hooked! =D ^_~ - ____insert user here -
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! That chapter rocked. I love how original you've made the characters seem, with still keeping thier characterisation. Very very good...Update again soon.
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