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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Where do I start? First, you rock for using TS Eliot's The Hollow Men in your chapter. It flowed very well with the action. Second, Inuyasha kicks major ass in this one, and your waltzing destruction has to be the most creative thing I've ever seen. I'm so jealous of you for that =). Third, Inuyasha and Kagura's friendship is nice; I'm glad he has someone who can understand him. Besides, Kagura's one of my favorite Inuyasha characters and she's usually portrayed so poorly, yet you seem to capture her rebelious spirit perfectly. Also, are you hinting at a future romance between Kagura and Koga? I noticed that she doesn't irk him as much any more, and they seemed to have a little "moment" (or maybe I'm reading too much into the situation). Another thing--the Miroku smackdown was well-done. I've always thought it odd that people perceive Inuyasha as dumb, yet he's survived on his own for decades. He's just not socialized, and I'm glad he finally did something for himself instead of for his friends. Just wondering--why was Kagome so quiet? Lastly, that little bit with Sesshomaru was well handled, and enough to make me impatient for the next chapter. Great update!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated! I love this story, and I must admit that the idea of Inuyasha in leather and cotton/silk is very appealing...yum! I'm glad you addressed the fact that his friends treat him like a dog at times, because it's true. I can't wait to read more action (hopefully) next chapter. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wrte exactly teh kind of fic I love to read!
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Title: Satisfying.
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 23:21 CDT
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One word says it all!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh Oh--Inuyasha and Kagura together--this can only spell trouble for Naraku. I can't wait! Sesshomaru is a real bastard, and is lucky that Inuyasha didn't tear up his lands in his rage. Somehow, I feel that Sesshomaru is going to regret rejecting Inuyasha's help. Oh well, his loss. Great update and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Awsome!
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 07:29 CDT
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Thats just about all my briandeadedness can come up with....my mind has turned to mush. The chapter was awsome. Period.
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the update! I think Inuyasha's air spirit soul is hilarious. It wants Sesshomaru, but when Sesshomaru doubts it, it just says "Screw him" and leaves. Awesome. This is how I wish Inuyasha could be all the time. I'm hoping he goes and saves his friends next chapter and then comes back in time to save Sesshomaru (just to rub it in his face). Eagerly awaiting the next update!
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Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 17:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh yeah! I was so happy to see an update! Loved this chapter.
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Title: Kyaa!
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whell, I never thought that would be how it started. Rather imaginative. *Squeel* I just love this so much!
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Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! An update. Sesshomaru and Inuyasha are just too funny together sometimes. I liked how they could share silence and not need to fill it with pointless chatter (I can't stand when people do that). Sesshomaru's enjoyment at being in his brother's presence and his amusement at Inuyasha's explanation were entertaining. The fire-wielder doesn't waste any time, does he? Can't wait to read more about his training. Good update.
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Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I haven't seen a fic along these lines. I like the use of 'The Inferno', it peeked my interest and now I can't wait to read your next update.
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Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Sesshomaru and Inuyasha are off to find someone who can help with his burgeoning powers. All that time alone...wonder if something will happen between them? *snickers* Love Inuyasha's wit--he can go toe to toe with the best of them. The others were concerned, but I'm glad that they're staying behind: sometimes, you have to do things for yourself. Wonderful story--haven't seen one like it before. Can't wait for the next update.
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Title: *giggle*
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 05:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, ^__________________________^ that made me laugh. Go Inuyasha! What a smart ass. Awsome chapter!
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Title: AHHH!
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 14:44 CDT
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MOther night that was awsome! OOOooh, I so loved it. What will happen next i wonder. No, dont say you cant tell me, I know you cant I'm just saying...yeah. You have totaly captured my attention. I will wait for an update most patiently, but still...it will be a rather painful wait.
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