| "A Wiser Generation" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Lumster On: August 24, 2008 22:02 CDT
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Not bad story, frankly just glad to see something other then yaoi for a change in the Yugioh section. I swear for a series that has so many hot girls in it the section is almsot flooded with male on male loving. That being said reading this story I was struck with how poorly represented Yugioh GX is on the internet. Trying find a picture to refresh my memory of what some the less popular girls look like was a shock. Imagine my suprise when it turned out to be so hard find a decent picture of Jasmine and such.
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Reviewed By: robdawg On: April 15, 2008 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, this has got to be the most original Yugioh GX story ever written, anyway the reason I'm reviewing is to ask if you can add Tania and Camula into the harem. I would love it if you had a little Jaden/Missy lemon in it So When can I expect the next update. Don´t forgot abotu this fic dude. I wish to see mroe. ok email me at wranton1@mail.mccneb.edu
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Reviewed By: ovidkid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 10:00 CST
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HVulpes you put a white suduction chapter in your wiser generation story
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Title: Please add Camula and Tania
Reviewed By: Kitsune-Taishou On: November 16, 2007 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, this has got to be the most original Yugioh GX story ever written, anyway the reason I'm reviewing is to ask if you can add Tania and Camula into the harem.
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 05:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. I like it. The reason I didn't check this out earlier is I was ticked that you were focusing more on your Naruto fics and hadn't updated 'White Seduction' for a while. Keep up the good work. Could you give Bastion a couple of girls, hardly anyone Bastion getting a harem. I'm not asking for Alexis or Fonda but a couple of girls so Bastion could get some action.
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Title: Great Fanfiction
Reviewed By: Chaos Angel Darkheart On: November 01, 2007 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfiction, but I would love it evenmore if you made Missy one of the girls in Jaden's harem. I am dead serious, she is one of my favroite female characters in GX, I like her personlity. I also like Jaden, so I would love it if you had a little Jaden/Missy lemon in it to. So can you please make Missy one of the girl's in Jaden's Harem?
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Title: Good Work
Reviewed By: Blade Knight Makyura On: November 01, 2007 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, whats up? I have to say that this fanfiction is one of my favriotes. Jaden is my favroite male character from GX so its nice to see you starting this little "Jaden Harem" fanfiction. I do have one thing to requst though. While I do like Alexis, shes not one of my favroite GX female characters. Miss Fonda and Jasmine are so I loved the Jaden/Jasmine and Jaden/Fonda bits. But one of my favroite female characters is that Obelisk Blue girl Missy. You know, the one with the insect deck. I would really like it if you made Missy one of the girls in Jaden's Harem, that would make me love this story even more. Please consiter it.
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Title: The new chapter is HOT!!!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon On: October 27, 2007 05:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's me, Gallantmon of the Hazard! And I've got to say that the last chapter was pretty . . . (sly smile) 'eye opening' if you get what I mean. Talk about 'student-teacher relationships' huh?! Wow! You are a good writer and I hope to see more of your stories soon! Later and best wishes! PS: Thanks for allowing me to use elements of this and your 'Wisdom of the Pharaoh' story!
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Title: Hi there!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon On: October 09, 2007 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! I'm Gallantmon of the Hazard! A Digimon, Sailor Moon, Naruto, Inuyasha, Yu-Yu-Hakusho, Dragonball, and all around anime fan, especially of Yu-Gi-Oh R and Yu-Gi-Oh GX! I've read and skimmed this story on adultfanfiction(dot)net and it is very interesting to me. Hope that you update it! But I would like to ask a question: Can you give me your Hotmail address? I've sent you a private message from Fanfiction(dot)net, but I think that it might have been sent to your Yahoo account. And you said that you wish to be contacted in your Hotmail and not your Yahoo account. So, could I have that address? I wish to contact you to ask some questions about this story and 'Wisdom of the Pharaoh'. Here is where you can contact me: My e-mail is dfoarile@hotmail(dot)com. Hope to hear from you and keep up with the story!
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Reviewed By: flaredragonKnight On: July 22, 2007 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yu should update this fic man. I would liek to see an orgy featuring Alexis,Jaden,Mindy and Jasmine. Or at the very least put some more Alexis jaden lemons please. I like the way you write your lemon scenes it is detailed enough to understand what is going on. So When can I expect the next update. Don´t forgot abotu this fic dude. I wish to see mroe. ok
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Title: best fic
Reviewed By: robDOG On: April 15, 2007 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job. I love watching Yu-gi-oh! GX and seeing you make a continuation of your previous story with this is great. I love the sex in the story but i hope to see some duels to keep that Continue the great work and can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 18:18 CST
Comment/Review:
I got an idea. Jaden wants Sy to get laid? what about a re-write of Duel Monster Spirit Day, when, you know, DMG can show up?
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Reviewed By: DancingKirby [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 06:00 CST
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This is a bit difficult to read sometimes because there are so many typos, but I must admit it has an interesting plot. I've always thought similar stuff goes on in the Society of Light. By the way, someone plagiarized your lemon scene from Chapter Two. Pretty much all the plagiarizer did was change the characters involved. I know accusing someone of plagiarism is a really severe accusation, but she already plagiarized MY fic several months ago. And my fic was a PG-rated humor fic that she turned into hentai. Ugh...but both fics containing the plagiarism have been taken down. Just thought you'd want to know...no one told ME about it. I found it myself.
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Title: good fic
Reviewed By: un named On: October 27, 2006 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job we need more het lemons in yugioh dont stop now
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Reviewed By: Rey Rey On: April 28, 2006 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job. I love watching Yu-gi-oh! GX and seeing you make a continuation of your previous story with this is great. I love the sex in the story but i hope to see some duels to keep that Yu-gi-oh! feel to it. Continue the great work and can't wait for the next chapter.
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