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| "Disappearances of Life, Love, and Truth" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: i hate it ended
Reviewed By: TyniDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish i would have read this when you first started this, then i could have wrote a whole bunch of reviews so that you would have been influenced to continue writing. well i have to say this was an excellent fic and if you ever decide to pick this back up which i wish you would, i would read it and review. i would really like to know what happens....please.....possibly update again. i think it has been a while but it would be worth it. please.......please....just finish. please?
| Title: FFRG - Review of the Prolouge
Reviewed By: staindgrey [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 17:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read the prolouge as you had requested, but now I'm wanting to read the rest of this story too. You show extremely good writing style here, with good word choice and believable dialogue and actions from the characters themselves, which is something a lot of fanfiction lacks. You kept everyone in character, (even though I have a hard time picturing Relena cheating on Heero, I'll let that one slide...) and hinted at a lot of the things to come in the story, which is always good for a hooking prolouge. All in all, I think this is a great, well-rounded piece of writing, though you definitely need to give it a read-through to correct a bunch of careless grammar mistakes; I caught a bunch of small things. But, with that aside, this is very good work, and like I said, I'll be reading the rest once I find the time. Adios from the FFRG.
| Reviewed By: Soldier of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 20:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! I hate cliffys >.> please update! I want to know what happens I need to know answers to the zillions of questions piling up in my little head!
| Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
hmmm......your first review.what to say? well first off this is a very interesting take on the boys. Love wufei duo pairings because their such great opposites. I like the ooc you give the boys beome it gives us more to look at and more for you to play with with. Don't give up now. the story as barely even begun! Keep writing .Keep updating.
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