| "Masquerade: Dance of the Phoenix" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Want more!!!
Reviewed By: KD On: July 16, 2007 09:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SEQUEL!!!! There have to be more, i am dying here. The wait is long and hopefully it will bear fruit one of these years. I know you are a busy person but please write more on this plot. It just sooo hot!! Please!!
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Reviewed By: sglily - nli On: June 14, 2006 21:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. Treize lurking in the shadows while essentially contemplating his past, his time of healing, fleeting moments with Wufei all the while watching in the present time the one he longed for from a distance was well written. I found it ironic that he would count the long list of other potential suitors who had approached Wufei, each rebuffed in turn. Wufei knew on some level that the masked man was someone he should know. I liked how Wufei was more aggressive than Treize had remembered - and how sad Treize was that Wufei had had other lovers in Treize's absence. That Treize savored the moment with his lover while remaining masked only made the moment more mysterious, captivating, and let's face it - hot! It was interesting as time went on and Treize's insecurities threatened to overtake him and that he feared removing the mask after all. Naturally it would have been fulfilling to experience Wufei's reaction once the mask was removed - what a tortureous ending! A job well done!
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Reviewed By: moon_ On: May 29, 2006 12:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome as always...and i'd love to read the sequal...but i have no clue where to find that fic. Y_Y
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Reviewed By: lo On: April 14, 2006 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job!! You are on a roll. At first the story was coming on as a little cold, but began to warm up as Treiz was struggling with is own emotions. Nice job!
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Reviewed By: pyrzm not signed in On: April 14, 2006 09:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Very sensuous! Nice job!
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