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| "Dragon-Kitten" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: lolll :) On: April 23, 2006 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was great. lol. that was so cute. i loved it so much. *melts* ah... *sighs wistfully* i love wufei and heero together. :)
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Reviewed By: pucha pucha On: April 17, 2006 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
when i saw the 1x5, i was sure there was something interesting to read. heh. and it was. heh. sorry. let me regain composure. breathe. okay. nice writing, i didn't see any errors to comment on. i like duo's thoughts, they seem real enough. i liked the relationships, i liked the overall....plot? STORY. and i liked it. really. i did. heh. good job dearie. the only reason i didn't give a 10 for overall was because the ending seemed a spit rushed. i wish you wrote it more...yannoo....yanno. anyways, and i'm a greedy thing i wanted more. i do want more. MORE. hahahah. okay. keep writing, it would be a shame if you stopped. one of the few 1x5 writers. i love you. heh...----pucha
| Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not Logged in) On: April 16, 2006 11:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
......Wow...I was a little confused on the pairings, but I think I get it now. It has to be a 02x03x04 and 01x05. I think. This was really cute, though I did see that it focused more on revealing Duo's character than on Heero and Wufei. That is all good and everything, but I thought it would have been better if it would have focused equally on the two who were smexing and Duo. Not to degrade your story or anything, like I said, this was soooo kawaii. Glad I read it. Ja!
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