| "Fatal Lightning" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Schwarz tot schwarz das bloot [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An excellent job. How about making your fans happy and updating! ;)
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Reviewed By: Sapphire17 On: February 26, 2003 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV this fic!!! I really hope that you decide to continue it! It's one of the best!!! |
Reviewed By: Majishian [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 17:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I really like this! Very well written, and a good plot development, too! I'm loking forward to reading more! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Mako Thunderbird [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 16:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice! Probably my favorite Jin/Hwoarang story. One tip, though: Hwoarang is a bit too feminine. He's portrayed like that in most yaoi, so you may try making him a bit more manly in the future.^_^
good job, though! |
